聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and small grammatical errors (e.g. 'something movie' → 'movies').

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, mainly on TikTok and Instagram. For example, we often comment on funny short videos or discuss interesting movie clips, which gives us things to laugh about and share opinions.

建議: Structure your response: give a clear topic sentence, then contrast the two groups using linking words (e.g. 'on the one hand... on the other hand'). Use specific examples and correct grammar ('a group of friends', 'more knowledgeable about education').

範例: I usually chat about two main things. On the one hand, I talk with older friends about education and study tips because they are more experienced; for instance, they recommend useful courses and application strategies. On the other hand, friends my age and I share funny moments and short videos to relax.

建議: Very good answer: clear topic sentence and reasons. Improve by removing minor repetition and tightening language. Add a brief linking word to show result or contrast if needed.

範例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because conversations feel more personal and honest. As a result, with a close friend I can talk about sensitive topics without fear of judgment, which I often cannot do in large groups.

建議: Good structure and clear reason. Improve naturalness by correcting the phrase 'only conversations can be easily misinterpreted' to 'text-based messages' and using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because text messages are often misinterpreted. In person, I can read facial expressions and tone of voice, so I understand people’s feelings much more accurately.

建議: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Reduce hesitations and use correct verb forms (e.g. 'I dislike arguing' and 'I can sense their feelings').

範例: No, I dislike arguing with friends because it makes me nervous and I can usually sense their feelings, which helps me calm the situation. For example, if a disagreement starts, I prefer to pause the conversation and talk later when we are calmer.

× I absolutely like chatting with my friends, especially on Tiktok and Instagram because we can talk about some videos and it can be about some funny moments or about something movie.

✓ I absolutely like chatting with my friends, especially on TikTok and Instagram, because we can talk about videos, which might be about funny moments or movies.

Incorrect preposition and article use: 'on Tiktok and Instagram' is okay but TikTok capitalization fixed; 'some videos' is fine but 'it can be about some funny moments or about something movie' is ungrammatical. Replaced with 'which might be about funny moments or movies' to use a relative clause and plural noun 'movies'. Suggestion: use 'which' to refer to 'videos' and use plural nouns where appropriate.

× Well, actually there's a one part of my friends that they're older than me and they have more information about education, so that's why I try to learn something from them.

✓ Well, actually one part of my friends are older than me and they know more about education, so I try to learn from them.

Singular/plural mismatch and awkward construction: 'there's a one part of my friends' incorrectly uses singular 'there's' and 'one part'; use 'one part of my friends are' or better 'some of my friends are older'. Also 'have more information about education' is unnatural; use 'know more about education'. Suggestion: use 'some of my friends are older' or 'one group of my friends is older'.

× But there's another type of my friends which we have the same age and we can discuss about something funny moments and short videos.

✓ But another group of my friends is the same age as me and we can discuss funny moments and short videos.

Incorrect use of 'which' for people and awkward phrasing: use 'group' or 'friends' and 'the same age as me'. Remove unnecessary 'about' after 'discuss' and make 'funny moments' plural. Suggestion: use 'discuss funny moments' or 'talk about funny moments'.

× If the person is is a close friend, talking to them can be as meaningful as talking to 20 or 30 people since I can discuss anything and not worry about judgments.

✓ If the person is a close friend, talking to them can be as meaningful as talking to 20 or 30 people, since I can discuss anything and not worry about judgment.

Typo 'is is' fixed. 'Judgments' is plural but 'judgment' (the concept) works better here. Also add comma for clarity. Suggestion: remove duplicated word and prefer 'judgment' or 'being judged'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because only conversations can be easily misinterpreted.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because conversations can be easily misinterpreted.

Extra word 'only' makes sentence unclear; removing it clarifies meaning. Preposition use 'face to face' is fine. Suggestion: remove unnecessary words and ensure the intended contrast is clear.

× In person, I can read the other person's tone and body language, which helps me understand their feelings more accurately.

✓ In person, I can read the other person's tone and body language, which helps me understand their feelings more accurately.

Pronoun use is acceptable but 'their' referring to 'the other person' is singular 'they' which is acceptable in modern English. No correction needed other than noting it's acceptable. Suggestion: keep as is or use 'his or her' if formal and gender known.

× Uh, well, absolutely dislike argue with someone, uh, and especially if, if that person, my friend, you know, sometimes I get nervous and during the cons conservation, uh, I can feel her or him feelings.

✓ Uh, well, I absolutely dislike arguing with someone, especially if that person is my friend; sometimes I get nervous during the conversation and I can feel their feelings.

Incorrect verb form: 'dislike argue' should be 'dislike arguing' (verb + -ing). 'Cons conservation' is garbled; corrected to 'conversation'. 'Her or him feelings' should be 'their feelings' for correct possessive pronoun. Suggestion: use gerund after 'dislike', use 'their' for singular gender-neutral, and 'conversation' for correct noun.

× So that's why I try to avoid argue with someone.

✓ So that's why I try to avoid arguing with someone.

After 'avoid' the verb should be in -ing form: 'avoid arguing', not 'avoid argue'. Suggestion: use gerund forms after verbs like 'avoid', 'suggest', 'enjoy'.