聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and conciseness: use correct verb forms and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases like “we will”.

範例: Yes, I do. Although we can't always meet in person, we often chat on our smartphones to stay connected. For example, we discuss K-pop groups and share small personal updates about our daily lives.

建議: Be specific and correct grammar: use singular/plural correctly and avoid filler words. Provide concrete examples and use linking words to organise points.

範例: I usually talk about upcoming social events and music, especially K-pop groups I follow. I also discuss personal feelings, such as how stressed I am before exams, so my friends can give advice.

建議: Clarify preference and use coherent structure: state preference clearly, then give reasons with linking words. Fix grammar ("both of the two cases" → "both").

範例: It depends. If I need diverse opinions, I prefer group chats because many people can share ideas; however, when I need emotional support, I usually talk one-on-one with a close friend.

建議: Make answer concise and structured: give a clear topic sentence stating preference or balance, then explain reasons with examples. Correct phrasing ("both methods", "meet each other").

範例: I prefer meeting face-to-face when possible because it's more personal and fun. However, when we're busy or living in different countries, we use social media to keep in touch.

建議: Be concise and use linking words: start with a general statement, then give reasons and an example. Avoid awkward phrases and repetition.

範例: Sometimes we argue, usually when we have different opinions about something. However, most of the time we get along well and resolve disagreements quickly because we care about each other.

× I really like to chatting with my friends even though we can't meet each other but we still will use smartphones to communicate and we will talk about the celebrities or the K pop groups that we like it or even some details that in our lives.

✓ I really like chatting with my friends. Even though we can't meet each other, we still use smartphones to communicate, and we talk about celebrities or the K-pop groups that we like, or even details of our lives.

The phrase 'like to chatting' mixes the infinitive 'to' with the -ing form; after 'like' you should use either 'to' + base verb (I like to chat) or verb + -ing (I like chatting). Remove 'to' and split the long sentence into shorter sentences for clarity. 'Will' is unnecessary for habitual actions; use present simple ('we use', 'we talk'). 'Like it' after the noun is redundant; simply 'that we like'. Use 'details of our lives' instead of 'details that in our lives'. Use commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: Use 'I really like chatting with my friends' for general preference and use present simple for habitual actions.

× We would talk about some social events or even the key pop groups or the celebrities that we like it, or even some personal emotions that we felt in our daily lives.

✓ We talk about social events, the K-pop groups or celebrities we like, and personal feelings we experience in our daily lives.

The original mixes modal 'would' with a general habitual context; present simple 'talk' is appropriate. 'The key pop groups' is awkward; use 'K-pop groups'. 'Like it' is incorrect after a relative clause; use 'we like'. 'Personal emotions that we felt' mixes past tense 'felt' with habitual context; use present tense 'experience' or 'feel'. Remove unnecessary words and simplify the structure. Suggestion: Use present simple for regular activities and avoid redundant pronouns.

× Both of the two cases that I will do for some something that I'm seeking for advice, I will chat with a group of people that observe lots of thoughts and for the only one friend, not just when I have negative emotions.

✓ In both cases, if I am seeking advice I will chat with a group of people to get many opinions. If I need one person's support, I will talk to a single friend, not only when I have negative emotions.

The original sentence has unclear structure and incorrect phrases ('Both of the two cases', 'for some something', 'observe lots of thoughts'). Clarify meaning: 'both cases' and conditional 'if I am seeking advice'. Use 'many opinions' instead of 'observe lots of thoughts'. 'For the only one friend' should be 'a single friend' or 'one friend'. Maintain consistent tense and clear parallel structure. Suggestion: Break complex ideas into clear conditional sentences and use concise phrases like 'many opinions' and 'a single friend'.

× I prepare both of the two methods communicate face to face that if I have free time and have appointment with my friends and I would do this but for the social media that we can meet each other and don't have free time or even my friends they are in foreign countries that we can meet each others then we would.

✓ I use both methods. I communicate face-to-face if I have free time and an appointment with my friends. For social media, we use it when we don't have free time or when my friends are in other countries and we cannot meet in person.

Problems with prepositions and articles: 'prepare both of the two methods' is incorrect; use 'use both methods'. 'Communicate face to face' should be 'communicate face-to-face'. 'Have appointment' needs an article: 'have an appointment'. 'In foreign countries' is okay but 'my friends they are' is redundant; use 'when my friends are in other countries'. 'Meet each others' is incorrect plural; 'meet each other'. Use present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions and articles ('use', 'face-to-face', 'an appointment', 'each other') and split into shorter sentences.

× Sometimes I would argue with my friends but it depends on situation like something that we have a fight or have different thoughts then we would have arguments. But normally time that we wouldn't do this that we all we care about each other so we hope that we won't harm each other.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends, but it depends on the situation; if we have a fight or different opinions, we might argue. But usually we do not; we care about each other and hope not to hurt one another.

Use present simple for regular habits: 'I argue', not 'I would argue' (unless hypothetical). 'Depends on situation' needs an article: 'depends on the situation'. 'Something that we have a fight' is ungrammatical; use 'if we have a fight' or 'when we disagree'. 'We would have arguments' is better as 'we might argue' for possibility. 'Normally time that we wouldn't do this' is awkward; use 'usually we do not'. 'We all we care' has redundant pronoun; use 'we care'. 'Harm each other' is fine but 'hurt one another' is more natural. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions, proper articles, conditional 'if/when' for situations, and avoid redundant words.