聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: ปรับให้ประโยคเป็นธรรมชาติและชัดเจนมากขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคตอบตรงๆ จากนั้นอธิบายเหตุผลด้วย linking words เช่น because/so และลดความซ้ำ ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง (lazy to type → lazy to type) และแก้แกรมมาร์ (many many, it's bored) ให้ถูกต้อง ตัวอย่าง: เริ่มว่า “No, I prefer calling them” แล้วตามด้วยเหตุผลสั้นๆ และตัวอย่างสภาพการณ์

範例: No, I prefer calling my friends rather than texting because I find typing tedious. Calling lets me hear their voice, so I can better understand their mood and react immediately.

建議: ทำให้คำตอบชัดเจนและมีโครงสร้าง: เริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อ แล้วใช้ linking words เช่น for example หรือ when เพื่อขยายความ และใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง (personal issues, ask them for support) เพิ่มรายละเอียดเฉพาะเจาะจงแทนคำกว้างๆ

範例: I usually talk about personal issues with close friends. For example, when I am stressed or confused, I call them to ask for advice or just to explain what’s going on in my life so I feel supported.

建議: ลดความซ้ำและแก้แกรมมาร์ (one friends → one friend, I'm an introvert) เริ่มด้วยประโยคตอบตรงๆ แล้วให้เหตุผลสั้นๆ ใช้ linking words เช่น because และให้ตัวอย่างที่ชัดเจน เช่น situations when you prefer one-to-one

範例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I’m an introvert and feel more comfortable sharing private matters privately. For example, I’d call a close friend when I need advice rather than discussing it in a group chat.

建議: ตอบตรงๆแล้วให้เหตุผลโดยใช้ linking words (because, so) ปรับแกรมมาร์และลำดับคำให้ถูกต้อง (face to face → face-to-face, I can tell their mood) ระบุตัวอย่างผลลัพธ์ เช่น better understanding through body language

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read body language and tone of voice, so I understand their feelings better. Social media often lacks these cues, which can lead to misunderstandings.

建議: ทำให้ประโยคชัดเจนโดยตอบคำถามตรงๆ เช่น “Not often” แล้วอธิบายเหตุผลโดยใช้ linking words และแก้แกรมมาร์ (doesn't → don't/ I don't often argue) ให้ใช้คำที่เหมาะสม (hurt their feelings) ใส่ตัวอย่างสั้นๆ ว่าจัดการข้อขัดแย้งอย่างไร

範例: Not often. I try to avoid arguments because I don’t like conflict; instead, I talk calmly with a friend when a problem arises to explain my point and find a solution without hurting their feelings.

× I don't like chatting with my friend.

✓ I don't like chatting with my friends.

The noun 'friend' should be plural because the student later refers to 'them' and generalizes to friends in general; use 'friends' to match plural reference and pronoun agreement.

× I prefer to call them more because I think I'm too lazy to tap so many many.

✓ I prefer to call them more because I think I'm too lazy to type so many messages.

Use 'type' instead of 'tap' for composing messages and add a noun 'messages' to complete the idea. 'So many many' is ungrammatical repetition; use 'so many' or 'many'.

× It's bored.

✓ It's boring.

Use the adjective 'boring' to describe something that causes boredom. 'Bored' describes a person, not the activity.

× I like to hear the sound of people I have communicating.

✓ I like to hear the sound of people I am communicating with.

Use the present continuous 'am communicating' and include the preposition 'with' at the end to make the verb phrase correct. Also adjust word order for natural English.

× I think I can know the mood of them more.

✓ I think I can better know their mood.

Use the possessive pronoun 'their' instead of 'them' after 'mood' and move 'better' to modify 'know' for natural word order.

× When I chat with my friend I usually talk about the personal issue.

✓ When I chat with my friends, I usually talk about personal issues.

Use plural 'friends' and plural 'issues' for general situations; remove 'the' before 'personal issue' because it refers to issues in general; add a comma after the introductory clause.

× Like when I have a lot of problem and I don't know who to talk to I just shut my phone and ask them for sy or just I just want to tell my friend what is going on in my life.

✓ For example, when I have a lot of problems and don't know who to talk to, I just put my phone away and ask them for support, or I just want to tell my friends what is going on in my life.

Use 'for example' instead of 'like' to introduce an example. 'Problems' should be plural. 'Shut my phone' is unnatural; use 'put my phone away'. 'Ask them for sy' seems to mean 'support' (clarify). Maintain consistent plural forms 'friends' and fix punctuation and clause order for clarity.

× I prefer to chat with only one friends because I'm an introvert person.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I'm an introvert.

Use singular 'friend' to match 'one'. 'Introvert person' is redundant; use 'an introvert' or 'a shy person'.

× I don't like everyone to know what is going on in my life.

✓ I don't want everyone to know what is going on in my life.

Use 'want' instead of 'like' for expressing preference about others knowing something.

× I only want my close friend to know how my life is going on for example.

✓ I only want my close friends to know how my life is going, for example.

Use plural 'friends' for general reference and correct verb phrase to 'how my life is going'; place 'for example' at the end and add commas for clarity.

× So I tell them about my personal issue.

✓ So I tell them about my personal issues.

Use plural 'issues' when speaking generally; ensure pronoun 'them' matches plural 'friends'.

× I don't want anyone to know about my problem, that's why I prefer one friends.

✓ I don't want anyone to know about my problems; that's why I prefer one friend.

Change 'problem' to plural 'problems' for generality and 'one friends' to singular 'one friend'; separate clauses with a semicolon or period.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because in face to face I can know their mood of people I talk to, it's feel more comfortable to know how they feel and in social media is actually doesn't experience what we actually need to say.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because in person I can tell people's moods; it feels more comfortable to know how they feel, and social media doesn't convey what we actually need to say.

Use 'in person' instead of repeating 'face to face'; 'tell people's moods' or 'read people's moods' is natural. 'It's feel' incorrect; use 'it feels'. Remove extra words and restructure the sentence for clarity and correct verb forms.

× I actually doesn't agree with my friend because I'm a type of person that doesn't like to have a lot of problems a group.

✓ I actually don't argue with my friends because I'm the type of person who doesn't like to have a lot of problems in a group.

Use 'don't' for plural subject and change 'doesn't agree with' to 'don't argue with' to match meaning. Use 'friends' plural and 'the type of person who' for correct relative clause; add 'in a group' for intended meaning.

× I I only talk normally with my friend when I have problem.

✓ I only talk normally with my friends when I have a problem.

Remove duplicated 'I'. Use plural 'friends' for generality and add article 'a' before 'problem'.

× I don't want to say something bad to my friends because it might hurt them feeling.

✓ I don't want to say something bad to my friends because it might hurt their feelings.

Use possessive 'their' and plural 'feelings' rather than 'them feeling'. 'Hurt their feelings' is the correct collocation.