聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and grammar errors, and use specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'because' or 'so'). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me stay connected. For example, I often use Instagram and messaging apps to share photos and plan meet-ups, which makes our friendship closer.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence describing the main topics, avoid unclear or contradictory words, and give specific details or one brief example. Correct grammar for people descriptions and verb forms.

範例: Mostly we talk about schoolwork and exams. For example, I often message my friend Aryan about homework problems and he helps me revise when I feel stressed before tests.

建議: Give a direct preference sentence, explain one or two specific reasons using linking words, and avoid repetition. Use correct pronouns and concise phrasing.

範例: I prefer chatting one-on-one with my friend Aryan because he gives me thoughtful advice about schoolwork. Also, private chats help me talk openly when I feel stressed.

建議: Answer directly and provide two clear reasons with linking words. Use correct verb forms and avoid vague phrases like 'a lot of knowledge give about the society.' Keep it brief and specific.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it builds stronger relationships and makes conversations more sincere. For example, meeting friends in person helps me understand their emotions better than texting.

建議: State clearly whether you argue, give a brief reason and one example, and avoid unclear or repeated language. Use correct tense and sentence structure to explain why arguments happen and how you resolve them.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my best friend Aryana, usually about schoolwork and deadlines. For instance, we disagreed about how to divide a group project, but then we talked calmly and agreed on a fair plan.

× I like chatting with my friend because it gave me a close connection to the with my family and friends because it connected to the messages, calls and social media.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because it gives me a closer connection to my family and friends through messages, calls, and social media.

The student used 'gave' (simple past) incorrectly for a general habit; present tense 'gives' is required (Grammar Problem Type ID 9 refers to past participle but the correct ID for tense is 6; however per instruction we only correct types listed — this sentence mainly needs present tense: use 'gives'). Also 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match general statement; 'closer' is comparative to show increased connection; 'to the with' is incorrect word order and extra words removed; 'through' is a better preposition. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions, plural for general friends, and clear prepositions.

× I always spent a lot of time with my friends within the chat like Instagram and social media so that's why I preferred Instagram is a better better website to chat with my friend.

✓ I always spend a lot of time chatting on Instagram and other social media, so I prefer Instagram as a better site to chat with my friends.

The student used past tense 'spent' while describing a habitual action; change to present 'spend' (ID 1 covers singular/plural but here fix tense and plurality). 'Within the chat' is unnatural; use 'chatting on'. 'Preferred Instagram is a better better website' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I prefer Instagram as a better site'. Use plural 'friends'. Remove duplicate 'better'. Advice: use present simple for routines and ensure subject and object plurality match.

× I usually chat about with my friends about the homework in the school.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about homework at school.

Redundant 'about' and wrong preposition 'in the school'. Use 'chat with' (not 'chat about with') and 'about homework' with 'at school' for location. Keep concise structure.

× I always spend a lot of time with my friend RDNA because he's a very nasty and caring person.

✓ I always spend a lot of time with my friend RDNA because he's a very nice and caring person.

The student used 'nasty' which conflicts with 'caring' and likely is a wrong word choice; change to 'nice'. Also ensure consistent singular 'friend' since referring to one person.

× He always encourage to me in the homework and when I feel very stressed.

✓ He always encourages me with my homework and supports me when I feel very stressed.

Subject-verb agreement: 'He always encourages' (add -s). Remove incorrect 'encourage to me' and use 'encourages me' or 'supports me'; 'in the homework' -> 'with my homework'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms and object placement.

× I always talk about my studies in the 12th class because I am a teenager so that's why I usually chat with my friend.

✓ I usually talk about my studies in 12th grade because I am a teenager, so I often chat with my friends about that.

Use consistent present tense 'usually' and 'often'. Use '12th grade' (or 'class 12') and plural 'friends' for generality. Avoid redundant phrases 'so that's why' by using 'so' or 'therefore'.

× I always chat with my only one friend which name is Aryan because he gave me always a good advice about the good advice about the topics and homework in school It it is also encourage me in when I feel very stressed.

✓ I usually chat with my only friend, Aryan, because he always gives me good advice about topics and homework at school, and he encourages me when I feel very stressed.

Many issues: word order, repetition, verb tense and agreement. Use 'my only friend, Aryan,' not 'which name is'. 'He always gives me good advice' (present simple and no 'a' before uncountable 'advice'). 'Encourage me in when' becomes 'encourages me when'. Advice: simplify, use present simple for habits, and correct relative clause usage.

× They also give me a good relationship with the other so that's why I preferred only chat with my friend only.

✓ He also helps me build good relationships with others, so I prefer to chat only with my friend.

Pronoun 'They' mismatches; refer to one friend 'He'. Use 'helps me build relationships with others' not 'give me a good relationship with the other'. Use present 'prefer' for habitual preference and remove redundant 'only'. Ensure subject-pronoun agreement and pluralization for 'others'.

× I always prefer to communication face to face because I will always build this strong relationship with the other people.

✓ I always prefer to communicate face to face because it helps me build strong relationships with other people.

Use infinitive 'to communicate' (not 'to communication' which is a noun). Avoid future 'will always' when stating a general reason; use present 'helps'. 'The other people' -> 'other people'. Advice: match verb forms and use present simple for general truths.

× So that's why I prefer the communication face to face because it give me a close connection and a lot of knowledge give about the society so that I preferred always communication with face to face.

✓ Therefore, I prefer face-to-face communication because it gives me a close connection and a lot of understanding about society, so I usually choose face-to-face communication.

Fix article misuse ('the communication' -> 'communication' or 'face-to-face communication'), verb agreement 'give' -> 'gives', awkward phrase 'knowledge give about the society' -> 'understanding about society'. Use consistent present tense 'prefer/choose' for habitual actions.

× Yes, I argue with my friend only my one friend is my best friend which name is Aryana.

✓ Yes, I argue with my best friend, Aryana.

Condense and correct relative clause: use ', Aryana' or 'whose name is Aryana.' Remove 'only my one friend' which is ungrammatical. Use present simple for habitual actions.

× I'm also argue for that about the homework and school work.

✓ I also argue with her about homework and schoolwork.

Use 'argue with' (not 'argue for'), and 'about homework and schoolwork' combined. Use present simple 'I also argue'.

× Then I will stress stress.

✓ Then I get very stressed.

Remove duplicated word and use correct verb 'get' to indicate becoming stressed; present simple for habitual or typical reaction.

× These always communicate to me and always discuss about the school homework.

✓ We always communicate and discuss school homework together.

Unclear 'These' wrong pronoun; use 'We' or 'They' depending on meaning. 'Communicate to me' -> 'communicate' or 'talk'; 'discuss about' -> 'discuss' (no 'about'). Use consistent subject-verb agreement.

× So that's why I will argue that the school homeworks are not about the social.

✓ So that's why I argue that school homework is not related to social activities.

Use present simple 'argue' for general stance. 'Homeworks' is incorrect plural; use 'homework' as uncountable. 'Not about the social' is unclear — rephrase as 'not related to social activities'. Improve clarity and noun forms.