聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific reason or brief example. Avoid awkward phrasing like “it will be” and redundant words such as “a good catch up and a quality time.” Use simple linking where needed.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. It’s a great way to catch up on each other’s lives, and we usually spend an hour sharing news and planning weekends.

建議: Correct grammar and be more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples and one short reason. Avoid repetition and fix pronoun/tense errors.

範例: I usually talk about our past experiences, especially memories from middle and high school. For example, we reminisce about school trips and funny classroom moments because they always make us laugh.

建議: Make the answer more fluent and natural. Give one or two clear reasons and link them with cohesive devices like “because” and “so.” Use correct verb forms and natural phrasing (e.g., “laugh together”).

範例: I prefer chatting in a group because we can cover many topics and share memories. As a result, conversations are livelier and we often end up laughing together.

建議: Use correct grammar and more concise wording. Begin with a clear preference, then give a specific reason and a brief contrast with social media. Avoid vague phrasing like “not only the text that we don't know totally what they are thinking.”

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read facial expressions and tone of voice. In contrast, social media messages can be ambiguous and easy to misunderstand.

建議: Improve grammar and clarity. Start with a direct answer, then explain briefly why disagreements happen and how you handle them. Use correct tense and smoother linking words such as “because” and “so.”

範例: Yes, disagreements do happen because we don’t always see things the same way. However, we usually talk it through calmly and try to understand each other’s point of view.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it will be a good catch up and a quality time.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it is a good way to catch up and have quality time.

The original used 'will be' (future tense) incorrectly for a habitual situation; present simple 'is' fits. Also 'a good catch up' and 'a quality time' are incorrect noun phrases; use 'a good way to catch up' and 'have quality time' to sound natural.

× We I usually talk about ourselves in the past, like the our life in middle schools and high school, which is very good to to thinking of.

✓ We usually talk about ourselves in the past, like our lives in middle school and high school, which is very good to think about.

Errors: extra 'I' and incorrect 'the our'. Use 'our lives' for plural life experiences. 'Middle schools' -> 'middle school' (general period). Double 'to' removed; phrase 'think about' is the correct collocation instead of 'thinking of'.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because we can discuss a lot of things together, exchange memories and we can be laughed together.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because we can discuss many things together, exchange memories and laugh together.

Use 'many things' instead of 'a lot of things' for more formal correctness; 'we can be laughed together' is ungrammatical passive—use active 'laugh together'. Removed redundant 'we' before 'laugh'.

× I prefer communicate face to face because we can see the facial expression, not only the text that we don't know totally what they are thinking.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because we can see facial expressions, not just text, which does not fully show what someone is thinking.

Missing 'to' after 'prefer'. Use plural 'facial expressions'. 'Not only the text that we don't know totally what they are thinking' is awkward and ungrammatical; rephrase to 'not just text, which does not fully show what someone is thinking' for clarity and correct structure.

× Yes, it's can be happened because we didn't think at the same way all the time, so sometimes we argued about some topic.

✓ Yes, it can happen because we do not always think the same way, so sometimes we argue about certain topics.

'It's can be happened' mixes contractions and modal incorrectly; use 'it can happen'. Tense consistency: use present 'do not always think' and present 'argue' for habitual behavior. 'At the same way' -> 'the same way'. 'Some topic' -> 'certain topics' or 'a topic'.