规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คำตอบของคุณมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'loos' ควรเป็น 'rules' และ 'during cars' ควรเป็น 'during class'. ควรตอบให้ชัดเจนและตรงประเด็น พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น 'For example' และให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนเกี่ยวกับกฎเหล่านั้น

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to use their phones during class because it distracts them from learning. This rule helps everyone stay focused and improve their academic performance.

建議: คำตอบของคุณไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงคำศัพท์ที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'palate' ซึ่งไม่เกี่ยวข้องกับบริบท ควรตอบโดยตรงและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ พร้อมให้เหตุผลหรือความคิดเห็นที่ชัดเจน

範例: Yes, I think more rules can help students stay focused on their studies. For example, rules about homework deadlines encourage students to manage their time better.

建議: คำตอบของคุณมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ เช่น 'most of teacher' ควรเป็น 'most teachers' และ 'feedback me' ควรเป็น 'give me feedback'. ควรตอบโดยตรงและให้รายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับครูที่คุณชื่นชอบ

範例: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He teaches specific subjects clearly and gives me instant feedback, which helps me understand difficult topics better.

× Yes, there are several loos at the at my school, for example, students are not allowed to use their phones during cars because it can D distract them from learning.

✓ Yes, there are several rules at my school, for example, students are not allowed to use their phones during class because it can distract them from learning.

The word 'loos' is incorrect and should be 'rules' to match the context. Also, 'cars' is a typo and should be 'class'. These are singular/plural and word choice issues affecting meaning.

× Definitely the rules are established by a school and teacher to make sure that student will stay focused on their learning and tomorrow could help their palate to to willing to.

✓ Definitely, the rules are established by the school and teachers to make sure that students will stay focused on their learning and tomorrow could help their palate to be willing.

The sentence has singular/plural mismatches: 'a school and teacher' should be 'the school and teachers' to refer to specific entities, and 'student' should be 'students' to agree with plural context. Also, 'palate' and 'to to willing to' are unclear and likely errors, but only grammar issues from the list are corrected.

× Yes, of course, most of teacher taught me about specific subjects and they can feedback me instantly and understand what I really struck in the.

✓ Yes, of course, most of the teachers taught me about specific subjects and they can give me feedback instantly and understand what I am really stuck on.

'Most of teacher' should be 'most of the teachers' to correct singular/plural and article usage. 'Feedback' is a noun, so 'can feedback me' is incorrect; it should be 'can give me feedback'. 'Struck in the' is incorrect; 'stuck on' is the correct phrase.