规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: In your answer, try to be more clear and natural by correcting grammar and word choice. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Students are required to bring their phones to class, wear proper uniforms, and be punctual."

範例: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For instance, students must bring their phones to class, wear the proper uniform, and arrive on time. These rules help maintain discipline and order.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion directly and support it with reasons using linking words. For example, say "Yes, I believe more rules can help students become more disciplined and educated because rules provide structure."

範例: Yes, I think students would benefit from having more rules. This is because rules help students develop discipline and create a fair environment for everyone to learn effectively.

建議: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the teacher's qualities. For example, say "Yes, my psychology teacher has unique teaching skills and explains concepts clearly, so students understand easily."

範例: Yes, I have a psychology teacher who does his job very well. He has unique teaching skills and explains difficult concepts clearly, which helps students understand the subject easily.

× Yes, of course there are many rules for the students at schools.

✓ Yes, of course there are many rules for the students at school.

The word 'schools' is plural, but the context refers to the student's own school, so the singular form 'school' is more appropriate here to indicate a specific place.

× For example, the student are aware to bring their phone site into the class and they should have proper uniform to wear for school and class and be on time.

✓ For example, the students are aware to bring their phone site into the class, and they should have proper uniforms to wear for school and class and be on time.

The subject 'student' is singular but the verb 'are' is plural; it should be 'students' to agree with 'are'. Also, 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' to match 'they' referring to multiple students.

× the student are aware to bring their phone site into the class

✓ the students are aware to bring their phone inside the class

The phrase 'phone site' is incorrect; it should be 'phone inside' or 'phone into' to correctly express bringing the phone into the classroom.

× students have take benefit more from the rules.

✓ students have taken more benefit from the rules.

The verb 'take' should be in the past participle form 'taken' after 'have' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× They have fair things and this is theirs and the great knowledge in the following the rules of the schools and it's make you well more educated or well more disciplined.

✓ They have fair things, and these are theirs, and great knowledge comes from following the rules of the school, and it makes you more educated and more disciplined.

The pronouns 'this' and 'theirs' are mismatched with plural 'things'; 'these' and 'are theirs' are correct. Also, 'it's make' should be 'it makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× he is having very unique skills to to teach the students and provide his knowledge to the students

✓ he has very unique skills to teach the students and provide his knowledge to the students

The verb 'is having' is incorrect in this context; 'has' is the correct simple present tense verb to express possession.

× the students can get easily to him and understand his discovery.

✓ the students can easily approach him and understand his explanations.

The phrase 'get easily to him' is incorrect; 'approach him' or 'get to him easily' is better. Also, 'discovery' is not appropriate here; 'explanations' or 'teachings' fits better.