鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the two parts of the question directly: state whether you like buying shoes and explain how often you buy them. Use natural phrases such as “spend my pocket money” and “make me look better.” Avoid unclear expressions like “go to my pocket money,” “touch soup,” and “increasing the personality of me.” Mention specific brands only if they support your answer, and connect your ideas with words such as “because” or “although.”

範例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially sports shoes from brands like Nike or Puma. I usually buy a new pair every few months, when I have saved enough pocket money. I like them because they make me feel comfortable and improve my appearance.

建議: Begin with a clear “Yes” or “No,” then describe one online purchase in a logical order: the website, the shoes, the delivery, and your opinion. Correct the grammar by saying “I bought a pair of Nike Air Force shoes on Flipkart,” “They arrived in two days,” and “They were comfortable.” Avoid hesitation, repeated “uh,” and unclear phrases such as “the rating of two was a good day” and “quality of fuel.”

範例: Yes, I have bought shoes online. I ordered a pair of Nike Air Force shoes from Flipkart, and they arrived within two days. They had good reviews and were comfortable, so I often use them for running. Overall, I was satisfied with the quality.

建議: Give a clear usual amount first, then explain why the price can vary. Use the correct present-tense form “I usually spend” and say “between 4,000 and 5,000 rupees on a pair of shoes.” If you mention a recent purchase, explain its purpose clearly, such as running. Avoid repeating “good” and “comfortable”; use precise adjectives such as “durable” or “well-cushioned.”

範例: I usually spend between 4,000 and 5,000 rupees on a pair of shoes. However, the amount depends on the type of shoes I need. For example, I recently spent about 6,000 rupees on running shoes because I wanted a durable and well-cushioned pair.

建議: State your preference directly and compare comfort with fashion. Use “comfortable shoes” rather than “comfortable suit,” and explain that comfortable shoes are suitable for daily activities, exercise, and long events. Organize the answer with linking words such as “because,” “for example,” and “although.” Avoid unclear phrases like “the old type occasions” and “training section of physical section.”

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I can wear them for long periods without hurting my feet. For example, I choose well-cushioned shoes for walking and training. Although fashionable shoes look attractive, comfortable shoes are more practical for daily life and special occasions such as weddings.

× Whenever I go to my pocket money, I like to buy the shoes.

✓ Whenever I get my pocket money, I like to buy shoes.

The preposition and verb combination go to my pocket money is incorrect. Use get my pocket money to mean receive money. Also, shoes is used without the definite article when speaking about shoes in general.

× I like to buy the shoes.

✓ I like to buy shoes.

The definite article the is unnecessary because you are talking about shoes in general, not a specific pair.

× I like to buy the shoes for my looking some better at increasing the personality of me.

✓ I like to buy shoes to look better and improve my personality.

The original sentence has an incorrect and confusing structure. Use to + base verb to express purpose: to look and improve. The natural expression is improve my personality, not increasing the personality of me.

× It fills me some better and some comfortable.

✓ They make me feel better and more comfortable.

The verb fill is not used in this structure. Use make someone feel + adjective. Better and comfortable are adjectives, so they should describe how you feel. Comfortable requires the comparative form more comfortable when it is compared with your previous condition.

× I go touch soup of some that companies like Nike, Puma.

✓ I go to shoe shops that sell products from companies such as Nike and Puma.

The plural noun shops is needed because you are referring to stores in general. Company names are also joined with and when referring to more than one company.

× I go touch soup of some that companies like Nike, Puma.

✓ I go to shoe shops that sell products from companies such as Nike and Puma.

The correct preposition for movement toward a place is to: go to shoe shops. The phrase of some that companies is not grammatically correct; use from companies such as instead.

× Its name was Nike Air Force 41.

✓ The model was the Nike Air Force 1.

A specific shoe model normally takes the definite article the. The original model name also appears to have been pronounced incorrectly; the common model name is Nike Air Force 1.

× The rating of two was a good day.

✓ The shoes had a good rating of two stars.

The original sentence combines a rating with the unrelated phrase a good day. Use the structure have a rating of + number. The noun shoes is also needed to make the subject clear.

× It was delivered to me in two days and the quality of fuel was a good day.

✓ They were delivered to me in two days, and the quality of the shoes was good.

Because you are describing a completed purchase, the past tense was delivered and was is appropriate. The phrase was a good day is incorrect; use was good to describe quality.

× She was also comfortable and get me a some important for a running.

✓ They were also comfortable and gave me some support while running.

Shoes are plural, so use the pronoun they, not she. The pronoun they must be followed by were, and gave is the past-tense form needed because the purchase happened in the past.

× She was also comfortable and get me a some important for a running.

✓ They were also comfortable and gave me some support while running.

The verb get is in the wrong form for a completed past event. Its past-tense form is gave in this sentence.

× They gave me a some support for running.

✓ They gave me some support while running.

Do not use a before the uncountable noun support. Use some support. The expression while running is also the natural way to describe the activity.

× Well, usually I spent about four to five thousand on shoes.

✓ Well, I usually spend about four to five thousand on shoes.

The adverb usually describes a regular habit, so use the present simple spend, not the past form spent.

× I spent about a four to five thousand on shoes.

✓ I usually spend about four to five thousand on shoes.

The article a cannot be used before the range four to five thousand. Use the number range directly. If you mean money, add the currency, such as rupees.

× I usually spend about four to five thousand on shoes.

✓ I usually spend about four to five thousand on shoes.

The preposition on is correct with spend when describing money used for a purchase: spend money on shoes. This sentence is grammatically correct after removing the unnecessary article a.

× It can also depend to me for which case I was buying the shoes.

✓ It also depends on the purpose for which I am buying the shoes.

The verb depend is followed by the preposition on, not to. The phrase for which case is unnatural here; use the purpose for which to explain why you are buying the shoes.

× It can also depend to me for which case I was buying the shoes.

✓ It also depends on the purpose for which I am buying the shoes.

When explaining your general spending habits, use the present simple depends. The present continuous am buying is suitable when referring to the current purpose of a purchase.

× Recently I buy a shoes about 6000 for my running.

✓ Recently, I bought a pair of shoes for 6,000 rupees for running.

Recently refers to a completed purchase, so use the past tense bought, not the present-tense verb buy.

× Recently I buy a shoes about 6000 for my running.

✓ Recently, I bought a pair of shoes for 6,000 rupees for running.

The singular article a cannot be used directly before the plural noun shoes. Use a pair of shoes.

× Recently I buy a shoes about 6000 for my running.

✓ Recently, I bought a pair of shoes for 6,000 rupees for running.

Use for, not about, before the purpose of buying the shoes. Use for 6,000 rupees to describe the price and for running to describe the intended activity.

× The quality of shoes was a good day and a comfortable.

✓ The quality of the shoes was good, and they were comfortable.

Good and comfortable are adjectives, but a good day is a noun phrase and cannot describe shoe quality. Also, comfortable must describe the shoes, so use the pronoun they were comfortable.

× The quality of shoes was a good day and a comfortable.

✓ The quality of the shoes was good, and they were comfortable.

Use the definite article the before shoes because you are referring to the specific shoes you bought.

× I prefer to buy a comfortable suit closer the comfortable shoes rose or some better options.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because they are a better option.

The original sentence does not connect its ideas clearly. Use because to give the reason for your preference. The word suit is incorrect in this context; the appropriate noun is shoes.

× I prefer to buy a comfortable suit closer the comfortable shoes.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes.

No article is needed before comfortable shoes because you are discussing shoes in general. The phrase a comfortable suit does not refer to the intended item.

× They are better options for using or wearing the old type occasions.

✓ They are a better option for wearing on all types of occasions.

Use for wearing to describe the purpose, and use on before occasions. The natural expression is all types of occasions, not the old type occasions.

× It can also use in the training section of physical section.

✓ They can also be used for physical training.

Shoes receive the action of using, so the passive form be used is required. Because shoes is plural, use they can be used, not it can use.

× It can also use in the training section of physical section.

✓ They can also be used for physical training.

The subject shoes is plural, so the pronoun must be they rather than it.

× We can go to some special occasions for like a wedding or some.

✓ We can also wear them on special occasions, such as weddings.

Use on with occasions: on special occasions. Use such as to introduce examples. The verb wear is needed because shoes are worn at occasions.

× We can go to some special occasions for like a wedding or some.

✓ We can also wear them on special occasions, such as weddings.

When giving a general example, use the plural noun weddings. This matches the plural expression special occasions.