鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitations and incorrect grammar (e.g. 'it's not suitable for me', 'I only wear shoes for sports').

範例: I don't like buying shoes very much. I usually only buy them when I need shoes for sports, such as walking or running, because I prefer sandals or slippers for everyday use. Therefore, I shop for shoes rarely—perhaps once or twice a year.

建議: Answer directly and give specific reasons with clear linking words. Use correct phrases like 'I haven't bought shoes online' or 'I prefer to try shoes on in store because...'. Reduce repetition and filler words.

範例: No, I haven't bought shoes online. I prefer to buy them in a shop because sizes can vary between brands, and I like to try them on to make sure they fit and feel comfortable.

建議: Give a clear estimate or range and explain priorities. Use one or two sentences with linking words to show contrast (e.g. 'instead' or 'rather than'). Avoid fragmented sentences and incorrect verb forms.

範例: I usually don't spend much on shoes—perhaps around $20–$30 per pair—because I don't wear them often. Instead, I prefer to spend money on beauty products, clothing, and gadgets.

建議: State your preference clearly and give specific reasons with linking words (e.g. 'because', 'so', 'however'). Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid unfinished thoughts. Use correct adjectives and plural forms.

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I walk and run often, and comfort matters more to me. Fashionable shoes usually feel tight or stiff, so I only own one or two pairs of those.

× I don't really like buying shoes, uh, because it's not uh, suit for me and it is not more comfortable for me when I need them means I go for a shop and I buy there when I go for some sports like walking that time only I wear shoes. That's probably.

✓ I don't really like buying shoes because they don't suit me and they're not comfortable for me. I only buy shoes when I need them, for example for sports like walking; only then do I wear shoes.

The student used 'it' and 'suit' incorrectly and omitted plural agreement and articles. 'Suit' requires a plural subject with shoes, so use 'they don't suit me'. 'It is not more comfortable for me when I need them' is awkward; use 'they're not comfortable for me'. Also clarify sentence structure by splitting into shorter clauses and using correct pronouns for shoes. Suggest practicing subject-pronoun agreement and simpler sentence structures. Grammar problem type ID:17

× No, I don't really buy shoes in online because, uh, sometimes, uh, they change the sizes and they misunderstands their sizes and they give unfitted shoes in most probably I go for shopping, I go there and I, I wear and I check with it.

✓ No, I don't really buy shoes online because sometimes the sizes are inconsistent and they send shoes that don't fit. I usually go shopping in person so I can try them on and check the fit.

The phrase 'in online' is incorrect; use 'online' without a preposition. 'They change the sizes' and 'they misunderstands their sizes' are unclear and use incorrect verb forms; use passive or neutral constructions: 'the sizes are inconsistent' and 'they send shoes that don't fit'. 'I wear and I check with it' should be 'try them on and check the fit'. Suggest practicing correct preposition use and passive constructions for product issues. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I don't spend lot of money to into shoe because I not I'm not comfortable to wear most and more I properly. I spend more in some like a a beauty products and some sorts of clothings and western clothings like that I like and the gadgets like that when I spend that.

✓ I don't spend a lot of money on shoes because I'm not comfortable wearing many of them. I spend more on beauty products, various clothes (especially western styles), and gadgets.

Missing articles and incorrect singular/plural forms: 'lot of money' needs 'a lot of money'; 'to into shoe' is incorrect preposition and noun form — use 'on shoes'. 'Clothings' is incorrect plural; use 'clothes'. Simplify sentence structure and use correct plural nouns and articles. Suggest studying plural forms and common collocations like 'spend on'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I mostly prefer of comfortable shoe because when I go for a walk or running, it's so uh, it's so nice to walk or run with their shoes. Fashionable shoe is not fit for me. It's so big and so designs. I'm not like that person and most probably I have only one or two shoes in my home. So when I.

✓ I mostly prefer comfortable shoes because when I go for a walk or run, it's nice to have comfortable footwear. Fashionable shoes don't fit me; they are often too large or overly designed. I'm not that kind of person and I probably have only one or two pairs of shoes at home.

Incorrect adjective/adverb usage and noun forms: 'prefer of comfortable shoe' should be 'prefer comfortable shoes' (no 'of', plural 'shoes'). 'When I go for a walk or running' should be 'walk or run'. 'Their shoes' is wrong pronoun; use 'comfortable footwear' or 'comfortable shoes'. 'Fashionable shoe is not fit for me' should be 'Fashionable shoes don't fit me' and 'It's so big and so designs' is ungrammatical; use 'too large or overly designed'. Ended sentence 'So when I.' was incomplete; provide full sentence. Suggest practicing adjective-noun agreement and common collocations like 'prefer X' and 'pairs of shoes'. Grammar problem type ID:13