鞋子— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
Yes I do. I often buy shoes like twice a year. I prioritize the function of shoes. So the sole of shoes get tired I often purchase new one.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Yes, I have recently I hesitate to go shop to buy shoes. It is because the shops are located on the world from my house and it take a lot of time to go there.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
I'd say I often use ¥10,000 or ¥15,000 per one shoes. In my opinion is is not too much expensive and too inexpensive and appropriate price in.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
Actually, I like comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes and priorities the durability and efficiency when I choose choose because shoes place an important role on my work and maintain my body healthy.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分數: 68.0建議: 回答は直接的で内容も明確ですが、文法ミスや自然な語順の改善が必要です。また、文をつなげる接続詞や具体例を入れて、より自然で論理的にすることができます。次の点を注意してください：1) 時制と語形（例: “soles get worn” や “I purchase a new pair”）2) 接続表現（because, so, when）を適切に使う3) 文章を3～4文に収めること
範例: Yes, I do. I usually buy shoes about twice a year because I use them a lot for work. When the soles get worn out, I replace the whole pair rather than repairing them. I also choose shoes based on their practical features rather than appearance.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分數: 60.0建議: 内容は伝わりますが、文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が曖昧な箇所があります。自然な英語にするために、場所の表現（“far”）、接続語（so, because）や句読点を正しく使い、理由を具体的に述べてください。さらに1文目で直答し、その後に理由を述べる基本構造を守ってください。
範例: Yes, I have. Recently I prefer buying shoes online because the shops are far from my house, so it takes a lot of time to visit them. Shopping online is more convenient and saves me time.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分數: 62.0建議: 価格の幅は示せていますが、表現が不自然で文法ミス（数や冠詞、冗長表現）があります。金額の言い方は“per pair”を使い、評価は簡潔にまとめてください。比較や理由（quality vs price）を加えると説得力が増します。
範例: I usually spend about ¥10,000 to ¥15,000 per pair of shoes. I think this price is reasonable because the shoes are durable and good quality for daily use.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分數: 66.0建議: 意見は明確ですが、語順や語彙の選択、冗長な表現を改善してください。単語の繰り返しを避け、理由を一つか二つに絞って具体的に示すとよいです。また“efficiency”は靴には不自然なので“support”や“durability”を使ってください。
範例: I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because I’m on my feet a lot at work. Durable shoes with good support help prevent foot pain and keep me comfortable throughout the day.
文法
× Yes I do. I often buy shoes like twice a year.
✓ Yes, I do. I often buy shoes about twice a year.
The sentence needs a comma after 'Yes' and 'like' is informal/incorrect here for approximate frequency. Use 'about' for approximation. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural speech punctuation.
× I prioritize the function of shoes.
✓ I prioritize the functionality of shoes.
'Function of shoes' is awkward; 'functionality of shoes' or simply 'functionality' is more natural. This fixes word choice and sentence flow.
× So the sole of shoes get tired I often purchase new one.
✓ So when the soles of my shoes wear out, I often purchase a new pair.
Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement ('sole' vs 'soles' and 'get' -> 'wear'), missing conjunction and comma, incorrect noun phrase 'new one' (use 'a new pair'), and possessive needed ('my shoes'). Revised to natural expression.
× Yes, I have recently I hesitate to go shop to buy shoes.
✓ Yes, I have. Recently, I hesitate to go shopping to buy shoes.
The original fused two clauses without proper punctuation. 'I have' requires completion ('I have' what?) but in context means 'Yes, I have' to answer the question. 'go shop' is incorrect; use 'go shopping'. Add comma after 'Recently'.
× It is because the shops are located on the world from my house and it take a lot of time to go there.
✓ It is because the shops are located far from my house and it takes a lot of time to get there.
Preposition 'on the world' is incorrect; use 'far from'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it take' -> 'it takes'. Use 'get there' or 'go there' and correct word order.
× I'd say I often use ¥10,000 or ¥15,000 per one shoes.
✓ I'd say I often spend ¥10,000 or ¥15,000 on a pair of shoes.
Use 'spend' for money, not 'use'. 'Per one shoes' is ungrammatical; use 'a pair of shoes' or 'per pair'.
× In my opinion is is not too much expensive and too inexpensive and appropriate price in.
✓ In my opinion it is not too expensive or too inexpensive; it is an appropriate price.
Remove duplicate 'is', correct comparative structure: 'too much expensive' -> 'too expensive'. 'And appropriate price in' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'it is an appropriate price.' Use a semicolon or conjunction to join clauses.
× Actually, I like comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes and priorities the durability and efficiency when I choose choose because shoes place an important role on my work and maintain my body healthy.
✓ Actually, I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones and prioritize durability and comfort when I choose them because shoes play an important role in my work and help maintain my health.
Many issues: 'like ... rather than' is okay but 'prefer ... to' is better. 'priorities' should be 'prioritize' (verb), 'efficiency' is odd for shoes—'comfort' fits better. Duplicate 'choose'. 'shoes place an important role on my work' -> 'shoes play an important role in my work'. 'maintain my body healthy' -> 'help maintain my health'. Also correct pronoun 'them' for shoes.
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