鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "I find it really cost a lot of money and not affordable with me", bạn có thể nói "I find shoes quite expensive and can't afford to buy them often."

範例: No, I don't really like buying shoes. I usually buy them about twice a year because they are quite expensive and I can't afford to buy them more often.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Ví dụ, thay vì "so I feel not worried about buying shoes without checking", bạn nên nói "so I don't feel comfortable buying shoes without trying them first."

範例: No, I haven't bought shoes online yet because I usually prefer to see and try them in person. Moreover, the pictures on websites often look different from the real products, so I don't feel comfortable buying shoes without trying them first.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, thay vì "because I'm still a student so that I don't have any", bạn có thể nói "because I'm still a student and don't have much money."

範例: I usually don't spend much money on shoes because I'm still a student and don't have much money. Therefore, I try to buy affordable shoes.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì "I find it suitable and doesn't harm any physical health", bạn nên nói "I find them comfortable and they don't harm my leg health." Ngoài ra, câu "when I'm go to events or birthday" nên sửa thành "when I go to events or birthdays."

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I find them comfortable and they don't harm my leg health. However, when I go to events or birthdays, I prefer to wear fashionable shoes.

× I find it really cost a lot of money and not affordable with me.

✓ I find it really costly and not affordable for me.

The phrase 'cost a lot of money' is incorrectly used after 'find it really'. Instead, an adjective like 'costly' should be used to describe the subject. Also, 'not affordable with me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for me'.

× I feel not worried about buying shoes without checking.

✓ I do not feel worried about buying shoes without checking.

The phrase 'I feel not worried' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'I do not feel worried' to express negation properly in English.

× I usually spend not too much money on buying shoes because I'm still a student so that I don't have any.

✓ I usually don't spend too much money on buying shoes because I'm still a student and don't have much money.

The phrase 'spend not too much money on buying shoes' is awkward and incorrect. The negation should be placed before the verb 'spend'. Also, 'so that I don't have any' is incorrect here; it should be 'and don't have much money' to express the reason.

× it's not affordable to me.

✓ it's not affordable for me.

The correct preposition to use with 'affordable' is 'for', not 'to'.

× I find it suitable and doesn't harm any physical health for my legs.

✓ I find them suitable and they don't harm my physical health.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'shoes' (plural). It should be 'them'. Also, 'doesn't harm any physical health for my legs' is awkward; 'they don't harm my physical health' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× But when I'm go to events or birthday I prefer to try on fashionable shoes.

✓ But when I go to events or birthdays, I prefer to try on fashionable shoes.

The phrase 'I'm go' is incorrect; it should be 'I go'. Also, 'birthday' should be pluralized to 'birthdays' to match the plural 'events'. A comma is added for clarity.