列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 答题时要注意句子结构和语法，使用清晰的主题句并用一两句具体细节支持。避免重复填充词（如 "umm"）并改正动词形式（如 "like to make"）。可以用连词使逻辑更连贯，例如 because 或 so。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember items and shop more efficiently. For example, I write categories like groceries and toiletries so I don't waste time wandering around the store.

建議: 回答应该更具体，说明列表如何帮你安排工作（如优先顺序、提醒截止日期），並去掉语气词。保持句子简短明确，使用连接词如 because 或 so 来解释效果。

範例: Yes, I make task lists for work because they help me prioritise and meet deadlines. For instance, I list tasks by urgency each morning, which reduces wasted time and lets me focus on important projects.

建議: 这道题回答需要更流畅和语法准确。先给出一个清楚的主题句（例如 Some people don't like lists because...），然后用两点具体原因并举例说明。修正语法错误（如 "they think it takes too much time"，"they forget items"）。避免重复和结巴。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it takes too much time and they prefer spontaneity. Also, some worry they'll still forget things; for example, if they rush creating the list, they might miss an important item.

建議: 回答应更简洁并提供具体原因和例子。直接说明偏好并解释理由，如方便编辑、携带或同步。避免含糊表达和口头语，用完整句子连接理由（for example, so, because）。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to edit and carry everywhere. For example, if I remember something later I can quickly add it, and digital lists sync with my other devices.

× Yes, actually I like make a list when I go to the shop it can order me to buy some things correctly and have more time to umm other things.

✓ Yes, actually I like making a list when I go to the shop; it helps me buy things correctly and have more time for other things.

原句中 like 后面應使用動名詞 making（Grammar Problem Type 8）。此外句子過長缺少連接標點，且用詞不自然：用 "it helps me" 比 "it can order me" 更符合英語表達；介詞需用 for other things（見第11類但此處以語義調整）。建議：like 後接 -ing，使用適當連接詞或標點分句，選擇自然動詞短語。

× I think 1 calls on this because they usually think that it's have too much time to make a list and often they when they make a list they will have some some things to buy and and they will have forget something to go to the list.

✓ I think one reason is that they usually think it takes too much time to make a list, and often when they make a list they will have some things to buy and they may forget something on the list.

原句多處問題：使用數字 1 作主語不合適，應為 one reason；"it's have too much time" 是時態/結構錯誤，正確用法為 it takes too much time（屬於第6類或5類，但主要是句子結構，所以以動詞用法和時態調整）。like to make a list 為不定式或動名詞均可；重複單詞（some some, and and）需刪除；"forget something to go to the list" 不合語法，應為 forget something on the list 或 forget to put something on the list。建議：使用 one reason 引導原因，it takes 表達耗時，注意避免重複詞，選擇正確動詞短語。

× I prefer on my phone because on a paper, uh, you know, it's done. It's not natural to have a paper outside, umm, on your phone. I can uh, exit because, uh, when I forget stuff for something, I can add it, umm, on my phone.

✓ I prefer to use my phone because on paper, it's fixed; it's not practical to carry paper outside. On my phone I can easily edit it, because when I forget something I can add it on my phone.

原句中 prefer 後應接不定式或名詞短語，常見表達為 prefer to use my phone（Grammar Problem Type 8 與 26）。"on a paper" 應為 on paper 或 on a piece of paper；"it's done" 和 "it's not natural to have a paper outside" 表達不自然，改為 it's fixed / not practical to carry paper outside 更通順。"exit" 為錯拼，應為 edit（編輯）；"when I forget stuff for something" 語義錯誤，應為 when I forget something。建議：使用 prefer to do，注意介詞用法（on paper / on my phone），拼寫 edit，表達清晰簡潔。

× Yes, I actually like making a list for my work. It's very useful because I can spend less time on that and have more time on other things. Umm.

✓ Yes, I actually like making a list for my work. It's very useful because I can spend less time on tasks and have more time for other things.

原句語法基本正確，但 "spend less time on that" 指代不明，改為 spend less time on tasks 更清晰（屬於第6類時態/用法微調與第11類介詞/指代改善）。建議：避免模糊指代，用具體名詞表達更準確。

× Do you make a list when you shop?

✓ Do you make a list when you go shopping?

原句雖可理解，但更自然的說法是 'go shopping' 而非 'shop' 作動詞時常用 go shopping 表示購物這一活動（屬於第26類句子結構與慣用語調整）。建議：使用慣用搭配 go shopping。