列表— Part 1 評分報告

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Part 1

考官

Do you make a list when you shop?

考生

Yes, I make a list when I shop because the list can help me remember don't forget the things I need to buy.

考官

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

考生

Yes, I make a list for my work because it can helps me remember the tasks I haven't completed. It helps me a lot.

考官

Why don't some people like making lists?

考生

Because some people likes the casual life, they don't want to be controlled by their lists.

考官

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

考生

I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I want to add something I can edit it quickly.

評估

總分

總分: 6.0流暢度與連貫性: 6.0發音: 6.0文法: 5.5詞彙: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

分數: 70.0

建議: 你的回答表达了主要意思,但语法和表达不够自然,尤其是“remember don't forget”部分重复且不符合英语习惯。建议简化表达,避免重复,并使用更自然的句型。

範例: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember the things I need to buy.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

分數: 75.0

建議: 回答基本清晰,但存在语法错误,如“can helps”应为“can help”。建议注意动词形式一致,同时可以用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember the tasks I haven't completed, and it is very useful.

Why don't some people like making lists?

分數: 70.0

建議: 回答中语法错误较明显,如“likes”应为“like”,且句子结构不够连贯。建议使用连接词并调整句子结构,使表达更自然。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer a casual lifestyle and don't want to feel controlled by their lists.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

分數: 85.0

建議: 回答较为自然且表达清晰,但可以通过添加连接词使句子更连贯,同时丰富细节。

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can quickly add or edit items whenever I need to, which is very convenient.

文法

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I make a list when I shop because the list can help me remember don't forget the things I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because the list can help me remember not to forget the things I need to buy.

原句中 'remember don't forget' 结构不正确,动词 'remember' 后应接动词不定式 'not to forget',表示记得不要忘记。应使用动词不定式形式来表达目的或意图。

Third person singular issue

× Yes, I make a list for my work because it can helps me remember the tasks I haven't completed.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it can help me remember the tasks I haven't completed.

主语 'it' 是第三人称单数,谓语动词 'help' 应该用原形 'help',因为情态动词 'can' 后面跟动词原形,不能加 's'。

Third person singular issue

× Because some people likes the casual life, they don't want to be controlled by their lists.

✓ Because some people like the casual life, they don't want to be controlled by their lists.

主语 'some people' 是复数,谓语动词 'like' 不应加 's'。动词与主语在人称和数上必须一致。

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