列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and provide specific reasons using correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time. For example, I write down all the items on a piece of paper so I don't forget anything.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For instance, by listing my tasks, I can prioritize them and complete my work more efficiently.

建議: Your answer is somewhat relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and provide specific reasons with linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because it can be time-consuming. Also, they prefer to remember tasks mentally, which they find more convenient.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear preference with reasons, using complete sentences and linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember them better. For example, when I write a list by hand, I find it easier to focus on my tasks.

× Those are funny make a list when I go to shopping divorce it is more convenient and easy way to find boots and write on it out page.

✓ I usually make a list when I go shopping because it is a more convenient and easy way to find items and write them on a page.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and contains unclear phrases like 'Those are funny' and 'divorce'. The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used and the sentence structure is confusing. Correcting the pronouns and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Those are funny make a list when I go to shopping divorce it is more convenient and easy way to find boots and write on it out page.

✓ I usually make a list when I go shopping because it is a more convenient and easy way to find items and write them on a page.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'write on it out page' is incorrect; it should be 'write them on a page' to properly use prepositions and pronouns.

× Yes, I make a list for my work because it makes me. It makes more convenient and easy to work. And it is more it tells me doing work.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it makes things more convenient and easier to work. It also helps me keep track of my tasks.

The original sentences misuse pronouns and have incomplete thoughts like 'it makes me'. The pronoun 'it' should refer clearly to 'making a list'. Also, 'easy' should be 'easier' to compare convenience. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Some people don't like make English because it is a time consuming process and sometimes people remember the list in their mind.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because it is a time-consuming process, and sometimes they remember the list in their minds.

The phrase 'don't like make English' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making lists'. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. The pronoun 'people' is replaced with 'they' for smoother flow.

× Some people don't like make English because it is a time consuming process and sometimes people remember the list in their mind.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because it is a time-consuming process, and sometimes they remember the list in their minds.

After 'don't like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form ('making') to be grammatically correct. This is a common rule in English for verbs following expressions of preference.

× Just I prefer to make a list on on paper deposit. When I write on the paper I get I can easily remember the things and. Stand.

✓ I just prefer to make a list on paper. When I write on paper, I can easily remember the things.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and contains unclear words like 'deposit' and 'stand'. Removing unnecessary words and correcting pronoun placement improves clarity. Also, 'on on' is a repetition error corrected to 'on'.