列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'make a list' repeated and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the important items I need to buy, ensuring I don't forget anything.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain how the list helps you. Avoid fragmented sentences.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me focus on important tasks and complete them in order of priority.

建議: The answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your idea clearly with correct grammar and provide specific reasons using linking words.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel overwhelmed by seeing too many tasks written down, which can discourage them.

建議: Your answer is short and lacks fluency. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain your preference clearly and naturally.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because it is easier to check and update whenever I want.

× Some people do not like making. List because they've sometimes fail over exaggerated by watching items written on it.

✓ Some people do not like making lists because they sometimes feel overwhelmed by looking at the items written on it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'making. List' which should be 'making lists' to correctly use the verb + -ing form and plural noun. Also, 'fail over exaggerated' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'feel overwhelmed'. The verb 'feel' fits better here, and 'overwhelmed' is the correct adjective. 'Watching' should be 'looking at' to correctly describe the action of viewing items.

× It helps me to focus on my work which is very important to do and make me. Do first.

✓ It helps me to focus on my work, which is very important to do, and helps me to do it first.

The original sentence has a fragmented structure and unclear meaning. 'Make me. Do first.' is not grammatically correct. The corrected sentence connects the ideas properly, using commas and conjunctions to clarify that focusing on work helps the student prioritize tasks.

× I prefer to make a list on paper rather than phone because it helps me to check. Whenever I want to.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because it helps me to check whenever I want to.

The original sentence misses the preposition 'on' before 'phone' and incorrectly capitalizes 'Whenever'. Adding 'on' before 'my phone' clarifies the comparison. Also, 'whenever' should not be capitalized mid-sentence.