列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating that you make a shopping list because you tend to forget items. Avoid redundancy and incorrect words.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I often forget what I need to buy, so the list helps me remember everything.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains errors. Clarify that you make a to-do list for your work and explain how it helps you. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently.

建議: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Try to express that some people do not like making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember things naturally. Use simple and clear sentences.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a sharp memory and can remember things easily without writing them down.

建議: Your answer is mostly clear but has some grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, and it's easier to keep track of notes. On the other hand, paper lists can be lost easily, which is inconvenient.

× Yes, I prefer to make a list of inner whenever I go for shopping because I mostly remember die most because I mostly forgot the things so that's why I make the shopping list.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list of items whenever I go shopping because I mostly forget things, so that's why I make a shopping list.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns 'inner' and 'die' which seem to be errors or typos. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The sentence is corrected to use proper pronouns and verb forms for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes Sir, I prefer to make a list of my worker and it also helped me in a very effective way.

✓ Yes Sir, I prefer to make a list of my work and it also helps me in a very effective way.

The phrase 'a list of my worker' is incorrect because 'worker' is singular and does not fit the context. It should be 'my work' to indicate tasks or things to do. Also, 'helped' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so 'helps' is appropriate.

× Some people are down to prefer to make a list because they are very sharp. Reminder 90 and a good day to remember the things.

✓ Some people do not prefer to make a list because they have a sharp memory and a good ability to remember things.

The original sentence is confusing and contains nonsensical phrases like 'down to prefer' and 'Reminder 90'. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure for better understanding.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry all of my important thing notes on my phone as well as If we talk about a list on paper, it is a very daunting task because sometimes we lost the paper by.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry all my important notes there. As for a list on paper, it is a very daunting task because sometimes we lose the paper.

The phrase 'carry all of my important thing notes on my phone' is awkward; 'important notes' is better. 'If we talk about' is replaced with 'As for' for better flow. 'Lost the paper by' is incorrect; corrected to 'lose the paper'. Prepositions and verb forms are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.