列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and be more concise. For example, instead of 'If make a list I feel too restrictive for me,' say 'Making a list feels too restrictive for me.'

範例: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I enjoy browsing and discovering new products. Making a list feels too restrictive for me.

建議: Your answer has many grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, which affect clarity. Focus on forming complete sentences and using correct vocabulary. Also, explain clearly how the list helps you. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear words like 'folks' and 'per hour ties'.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage my tasks. I use an app that sends me reminders, which helps me complete my tasks on time.

建議: Your answer does not address the question asked. The examiner asked why some people don't like making lists, but you talked about your own habit. Make sure to answer the question directly and provide reasons or examples. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary errors.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find them restrictive or time-consuming. They may prefer to work spontaneously rather than following a fixed plan.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like 'The fold or so can Remember Me'. Use complete sentences and clearer vocabulary. Also, explain why using your phone is convenient with specific reasons.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can check them anytime and anywhere. It's also easy to edit the list, and my phone can remind me about important tasks, which is very convenient.

× If make a list I feel too restrictive for me.

✓ If I make a list, I feel it is too restrictive for me.

The original sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'make' and the verb 'feel' needs an object 'it' to be grammatically correct. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause. This correction clarifies the sentence structure and maintains present tense.

× 'Cause that help me stay organized and the folks that are my task.

✓ 'Cause that helps me stay organized and manage my tasks.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'that'. Also, 'the folks that are my task' is unclear and likely a misuse of words; it is corrected to 'manage my tasks' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I use a app to keep track my work list which.

✓ I use an app to keep track of my work list, which

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound. The phrase 'keep track my work list' is missing the preposition 'of' after 'track'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs continuation or proper punctuation.

× Send me reminders. And the help me per hour ties my task and managing my.

✓ It sends me reminders and helps me prioritize my tasks and manage my time.

The original sentences are fragments and lack clear subjects and verbs. 'Send me reminders' should be 'It sends me reminders' to include the subject. 'The help me per hour ties my task and managing my' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it is corrected to a coherent sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× Yes, I always make a list of all my work because it helps me stay organized and folks my tasks.

✓ Yes, I always make a list of all my work because it helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks.

The word 'folks' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'focus' to convey the intended meaning. This correction fixes the pronoun misuse and clarifies the sentence.

× I use an app to keep track my To Do List which sends me reminders throughout the day.

✓ I use an app to keep track of my To Do List, which sends me reminders throughout the day.

The phrase 'keep track my To Do List' is missing the preposition 'of' after 'track'. Adding 'of' makes the phrase grammatically correct.

× ensure that I completed my task on schedule.

✓ ensure that I complete my tasks on schedule.

The sentence is describing a habitual action, so the present tense 'complete' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'completed'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone so I can check it anytime anywhere and easy to re edited it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone so I can check it anytime, anywhere, and easily re-edit it.

The phrase 'easy to re edited it' is incorrect. 'Easy' should be the adverb 'easily' modifying 're-edit'. Also, 're edited' should be 're-edit' as a verb. Commas are added for clarity.

× The fold or so can Remember Me that more convenient.

✓ The phone or so can remind me; that's more convenient.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words. 'Fold or so' is likely a mishearing of 'phone or so'. 'Remember Me' should be 'remind me'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.