列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有一些语法和词汇错误，比如“make lid”应为“make a list”，“got off them”应为“got them”。建议你注意基本语法结构，使用正确的词汇表达，同时避免重复表达。可以尝试简洁明了地回答问题，并用具体细节支持你的观点。

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping, especially at the supermarket. I do this because I tend to forget items if I don't write them down. Making a list helps me remember everything I need to buy.

建議: 你的回答语法不正确，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议你练习使用简单完整的句子，明确表达你的观点。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子说明。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks. It helps me organize multiple jobs and complete them efficiently. When I have many tasks, the list keeps me focused and on track.

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但有重复和语法错误。建议你使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅。可以尝试用更具体的理由支持你的观点。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because it feels like extra work before they start their tasks. For example, they need to find paper and a pen, which takes time and can be inconvenient.

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和用词不当，如“take the nodes”应为“take notes”。建议你注意时态一致性和正确词汇的使用，同时用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I used to make lists on paper because it helped me remember better. However, nowadays, since phones are more convenient, I sometimes use apps to take notes on my phone.

× Yes I do make lid for every time shopping, specially when I go to the supermarket.

✓ Yes, I do make a list every time I go shopping, especially when I go to the supermarket.

The word 'lid' is incorrect; it should be 'list' which is countable and singular here, so 'a list' is needed. Also, 'every time shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'every time I go shopping' to be grammatically correct.

× I always forget something if I don't make a list so I've definitely list out all the things I need just to make sure I got off them.

✓ I always forget something if I don't make a list, so I definitely list out all the things I need just to make sure I get them.

The phrase 'got off them' is incorrect; it should be 'get them'. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.

× It work.

✓ It works.

The verb 'work' needs to agree with the singular subject 'It', so it should be 'works' in the third person singular form.

× During the work you do you really get one job but you have multi task to our Facebook to to complete.

✓ During work, you really get one job, but you have multiple tasks to complete.

'Multi task' is incorrect; it should be 'multiple tasks' to indicate plural. Also, 'to our Facebook to to complete' is unclear and likely a mistake, so simplified to 'to complete'.

× So I would make a list and it works well when I have a lot of. Job to do.

✓ So I would make a list and it works well when I have a lot of jobs to do.

'Job' should be plural 'jobs' because it refers to multiple tasks.

× Oh, I was saying it's it's making more things to do before you start work.

✓ Oh, I was saying it makes more things to do before you start work.

The phrase 'it's it's making' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes' to correctly express the idea.

× You need to get a paper, you need to get a pencil to write things down.

✓ You need to get paper, you need to get a pencil to write things down.

'A paper' is incorrect when referring to paper in general; 'paper' is uncountable and does not need an article here.

× It takes more time in at once.

✓ It takes more time at once.

The phrase 'in at once' is incorrect; 'at once' is the correct adverbial phrase meaning 'immediately' or 'all together'.

× I think I used to make those list on paper because that actually.

✓ I think I used to make those lists on paper because that actually.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'those' which is plural.

× Strengthen my memories, but nowadays as phone become more and more convenient, I sometimes use that app to take the nodes on my phone.

✓ Strengthen my memory, but nowadays as phones become more and more convenient, I sometimes use apps to take notes on my phone.

'Memories' should be 'memory' as the uncountable noun for the ability to remember. 'Phone' should be plural 'phones' to match 'more and more'. 'That app' should be 'apps' for general use. 'Nodes' is incorrect; it should be 'notes'.