列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“make a left”应为“make a list”，“forgot”应为“forget”，以及“protect something 1 by 1”表达不清。建议注意基本语法和词汇的准确使用，避免表达模糊。

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop. I prefer to write it down on paper or use an app because I often forget things if I try to remember them in my head. This way, I can make sure I don't miss anything important.

建議: 回答内容较完整，但存在时态错误（如“made”应为“make”）和语法错误（“It can makes me”应为“It gives me”）。建议注意时态一致和主谓一致，提升表达的准确性和流畅度。

範例: Absolutely yes. I always make a time schedule and a To-Do List to ensure I complete all my tasks. Besides, it motivates me to work harder. Moreover, it is a helpful way to encourage myself and gives me a sense of accomplishment.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“making list”应为“making lists”，“preferred”应为“prefer”，“mentale”应为“mentally”，“writing thing is done”表达不清。建议加强语法和词汇的准确性，表达更清晰。

範例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome and prefer to remember tasks mentally. For example, they believe that writing things down takes extra time and interrupts their flow of thinking.

建議: 回答中时态和拼写错误较多，如“preferred”应为“prefer”，“make list”应为“make lists”，“crossing N edged item”表达不清。建议注意时态一致，拼写准确，并使用更自然的表达。

範例: Personally, I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because I often create long lists, and writing them down helps me remember tasks more clearly. Also, crossing off each completed item on paper gives me a sense of accomplishment, which motivates me to finish everything.

× I'd like to make a left on paper or online rather than remember in the heart because I easily forgot something.

✓ I'd like to make a list on paper or online rather than remember it in my heart because I easily forget something.

这里的 'make a left' 是错误的，应该是 'make a list'，因为题目是关于购物清单的。'left' 是方向词，不符合语境。'remember in the heart' 应改为 'remember it in my heart'，加上代词 'it' 表示记住清单内容。

× I easily forgot something.

✓ I easily forget something.

句子描述的是一般情况，应该用一般现在时 'forget'，而不是过去时 'forgot'。

× So that we can't protect something 1 by 1.

✓ So that we can't protect things one by one.

'something' 应改为复数 'things'，因为这里指的是多个物品。数字 '1' 应该用英文单词 'one'。

× I always made a time schedule and To Do List to make sure that I can finish entirely.

✓ I always make a time schedule and To Do List to make sure that I can finish everything.

这里描述的是习惯动作，应该用一般现在时 'make'，而不是过去时 'made'。'finish entirely' 不自然，改为 'finish everything' 更合适。

× It can makes me a sense of accomplishment.

✓ It can make me a sense of accomplishment.

情态动词 'can' 后面动词用原形，不能加 's'。

× some people don't like making list because they find it troublesome and preferred to remember tasks mentale.

✓ some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome and prefer to remember tasks mentally.

'making list' 应为复数 'making lists'。'preferred' 应为现在时 'prefer'，与前半句时态一致。'mentale' 拼写错误，应为 'mentally'。

× writing thing is done takes extra time and interrupt their flow of thinking.

✓ writing things down takes extra time and interrupts their flow of thinking.

'writing thing is done' 结构不正确，应为 'writing things down'。'interrupt' 主语是单数，动词应加 's'，改为 'interrupts'。

× Personally, I preferred to make list on paper rather than on my phone because I often create long list and writing them down helps me remember the task more clearly.

✓ Personally, I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because I often create long lists and writing them down helps me remember the tasks more clearly.

描述习惯用一般现在时，'preferred' 改为 'prefer'。'make list' 和 'long list' 应为复数 'make lists' 和 'long lists'。'the task' 应为复数 'the tasks'。

× Also, crossing N edged item one by one on paper gives me a sense of accomplishment which motivates me to finish everything.

✓ Also, crossing off each item one by one on paper gives me a sense of accomplishment which motivates me to finish everything.

'crossing N edged item' 拼写错误且表达不清，应为 'crossing off each item'。'item' 前加 'each' 表示逐个。