列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use complete sentences. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I remember the common groceries I need for the week. Since these items are regular, I find it easy to recall them without writing them down.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your reasoning. Avoid fragmented sentences and be specific about why you don't make lists for work.

範例: Usually, I don't make lists for my work because my daily tasks are quite routine. Therefore, I find it unnecessary to write them down since I can remember them easily.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Provide a clear reason with supporting details. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they have sharp memories and prefer to rely on them. Additionally, in their jobs or businesses, they might find lists unnecessary.

建議: Make your answer more fluent and structured. Avoid filler words and fragmented sentences. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient to carry than paper. Moreover, typing on the phone is easy, and I can save and access my lists anytime.

× probably I'm don't make a list 'cause, you know, I remember all the things which I need like very commonly, like grocery in a week.

✓ probably I don't make a list 'cause, you know, I remember all the things which I need very commonly, like groceries in a week.

The phrase 'I'm don't' is incorrect because 'I'm' is a contraction of 'I am' and cannot be combined with 'don't'. Also, 'grocery' should be plural 'groceries' when referring to items bought regularly. Use 'I don't' for negation with 'I'.

× You know which things you have to. Need in your own life.

✓ You know which things you need in your own life.

The phrase 'you have to. Need' is incorrect and redundant. 'Have to' and 'need' both express necessity, so only one is needed. Also, the period is misplaced. The correct sentence is 'You know which things you need in your own life.'

× Oh, usually I don't make also. List for my work because you know in your daily routine, in your work, you don't have. Need to. Make a list.

✓ Oh, usually I don't make a list for my work either because, you know, in your daily routine at work, you don't need to make a list.

The phrase 'don't make also. List' is incorrect; 'also' should be 'either' and placed properly. 'You don't have. Need to.' is incorrect; it should be 'you don't need to'. Also, 'in your work' is better as 'at work'.

× Because you know the memory of peoples very sharp.

✓ Because you know, people's memory is very sharp.

'The memory of peoples' is incorrect; 'peoples' is plural for ethnic groups, but here 'people's memory' (possessive) is correct. Also, the sentence needs 'is' to link subject and adjective.

× I probably like to make list on phone because, uh, you know, paper is very difficult to carry and.

✓ I probably like to make a list on my phone because, uh, you know, paper is very difficult to carry and

Missing article 'a' before 'list' and missing possessive pronoun 'my' before 'phone'. These are necessary for correct noun phrases.

× Phone is very reliable uh for making a list and for typing.

✓ The phone is very reliable, uh, for making a list and for typing.

'Phone' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific device. Also, commas improve clarity.