列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сіздің жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және сөйлем құрылымы түсініксіз. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, қысқа әрі анық сөйлеңіз. Мысалы, 'No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I remember what I need to buy.'

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I remember what I need to buy.

建議: Жауабыңызда сөйлемдер түсініксіз және байланыссыз. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, логикалық байланыс орнатыңыз. Мысалы, 'Sometimes I make a to-do list for work because it helps me remember tasks and stay organized.'

範例: Sometimes I make a to-do list for work because it helps me remember tasks and stay organized.

建議: Жауабыңызда ойыңызды жақсы жеткізгенсіз, бірақ сөйлемдерді нақты әрі табиғи етіп құрастырыңыз. Мысалы, 'Some people dislike making lists because they feel obligated and prefer to do things spontaneously.'

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel obligated and prefer to do things spontaneously.

建議: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық және сөз қолдану қателері бар. Нақты әрі табиғи сөйлеңіз. Мысалы, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more practical and easier than writing on paper.'

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more practical and easier than writing on paper.

× No I do not because I don't find this necessary to me quiz because usually I know everything they want to buy or I need to buy so no.

✓ No, I do not because I don't find this necessary for me, because usually I know everything I want to buy or need to buy, so no.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used with 'necessary'. The correct preposition is 'for' when expressing necessity for someone. Also, 'to me quiz' seems to be a typo or misused phrase and was removed for clarity.

× Sometimes I make with stuff to do things because, uh, when I have a lot of things to do, I going to shower, make training or UM.

✓ Sometimes I make a list of stuff to do because, uh, when I have a lot of things to do, I am going to shower, do training, or um...

The phrase 'make with stuff to do things' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'make a list of stuff to do'. Also, 'I going to shower' lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present continuous tense. 'Make training' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'do training'.

× Just going in my house, so I organize everything to do not forget.

✓ I just stay at home, so I organize everything so I don't forget.

'Just going in my house' is an incomplete sentence and unclear. It should be 'I just stay at home'. Also, 'to do not forget' is incorrect; the correct form is 'so I don't forget'.

× I think they don't like their obligation, the feeling that you have to do something with that.

✓ I think they don't like the obligation, the feeling that they have to do something about it.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used with 'obligation' here; 'the obligation' is more appropriate. Also, 'you have to do something with that' is incorrect; it should be 'they have to do something about it' to maintain consistency and correct preposition usage.

× So maybe that's the reason why they don't like making plans.

✓ So maybe that's the reason they don't like making plans.

The phrase 'the reason why' is often considered redundant; 'the reason' alone is sufficient and more natural in this context.

× I prefer to do it on my phone because I don't just like writing and I think it's for.

✓ I prefer to do it on my phone because I don't really like writing and I think it's better.

'I don't just like writing' is awkward; 'I don't really like writing' is more natural. Also, 'I think it's for' is incomplete and unclear; 'I think it's better' completes the thought appropriately.

× Make a list in my phone allows me to be more practices and just it's just easier for me.

✓ Making a list on my phone allows me to be more practical and it's just easier for me.

'Make a list in my phone' should be 'Making a list on my phone' to use the gerund form and correct preposition. 'More practices' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'more practical'. Also, 'just it's just' is redundant; one 'just' is enough.