列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит повторения и некоторые грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь использовать более связные предложения и избегать излишних повторов, чтобы сделать речь более естественной и понятной.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stick to my budget and avoid impulse purchases. Additionally, it ensures I don't forget any important items and saves me time during shopping.

建議: Ваш ответ немного неструктурирован и содержит паузы. Рекомендуется строить предложения более плавно и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I work because it helps me complete all my tasks. Moreover, I feel very productive when I see that everything is done.

建議: Ответ содержит неясные выражения и ошибки. Следует избегать повторов и использовать более точные формулировки, чтобы сделать ответ понятным и логичным.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and not helpful. Others might feel stressed when they see a long list of tasks to complete.

建議: Ваш ответ понятен, но содержит некоторые грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать более точные конструкции и избегать повторов.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me and can easily check my tasks. I also use reminders to help me complete them, and I don't like writing things down on paper.

× Don't forget anything important and also it very useful for me because it's a it's saved my time, saves my time.

✓ Don't forget anything important and also it is very useful for me because it saves my time.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'is' before 'very useful', which is necessary for correct sentence structure. Also, 'it's a it's saved my time' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it saves my time' to express a habitual action in the present tense.

× I always make at least when I work because, uh, with that I can complete all tasks that I need also.

✓ I always make a list at least when I work because, uh, with that I can complete all the tasks that I need to do.

The phrase 'make at least when I work' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'a list' clarifies the object. Also, 'all tasks that I need' should be 'all the tasks that I need to do' for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× I feel very. Productive when I saw that when I see that all my tasks completed.

✓ I feel very productive when I see that all my tasks are completed.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past and present tense ('saw' and 'see'). Also, 'all my tasks completed' needs the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the passive voice correctly.

× In my opinion, some people don't like making list because they think that it's time consuming and, uh, not useful.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they think that it's time-consuming and, uh, not useful.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× Up on the other hand, some people can can be ancient or it can lead to stress due to that seeing.

✓ On the other hand, some people can be anxious or it can lead to stress due to seeing that.

'Up on the other hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'On the other hand'. 'Ancient' is likely a misused word here; 'anxious' fits the context better. 'Due to that seeing' is awkward; 'due to seeing that' is clearer.

× At least with a lot of tasks.

✓ At least with a lot of tasks.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and subject, making it incomplete. It should be connected to the previous sentence or completed for clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's where everywhere with me and I easily can see my tasks.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's always with me and I can easily see my tasks.

The phrase 'it's where everywhere with me' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'it's always with me'. Also, 'I easily can see' should be 'I can easily see' for natural word order.

× Also I use reminders in my phones, it reminds me to do something or to complete some tasks.

✓ Also, I use reminders on my phone; they remind me to do something or to complete some tasks.

'In my phones' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on my phone'. Also, 'it reminds me' should be 'they remind me' because 'reminders' is plural.

× And I don't like to write down something.

✓ And I don't like to write anything down.

The phrase 'write down something' is less natural than 'write anything down' in negative sentences. The placement of 'down' after the object is more idiomatic.