列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và ngữ pháp đúng, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp như 'remember' thay vì 'memory' và 'I can't remember' nên là 'I can remember'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I have a good memory. Therefore, I prefer to shop spontaneously and explore different items in the store.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và sử dụng từ đúng, ví dụ 'You solicit an app' không phù hợp, nên nói 'I use an app'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'when I completed work' nên là 'when I complete my work'.

範例: Yes, I do. I use an app that sends friendly reminders, which helps me stay organized. When I complete my tasks, I feel a great sense of accomplishment.

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác như 'memory' thay vì 'remember' và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trình bày ý kiến một cách logic và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý.

範例: I think some people have a good memory, so they don't feel the need to make lists. They prefer to work freely and spontaneously without planning too much.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, câu 'only there is so much apps I use absolute send me reminders my watching list' không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I have many apps that send me reminders. Using paper lists is less convenient since I have to carry them everywhere.

× No, I don't like to make a list when I will go shopping because I have a good remember, a good memory, so I can't remember what I need to buy.

✓ No, I don't like to make a list when I go shopping because I have a good memory, so I can remember what I need to buy.

The phrase 'when I will go shopping' incorrectly uses future tense 'will' after 'when'. In English, after time conjunctions like 'when', the present tense is used to refer to future events. Also, 'remember' is a verb, but here a noun 'memory' is needed. Suggestion: use 'when I go shopping' and 'a good memory'.

× No, I don't like to make a list when I will go shopping because I have a good remember, a good memory, so I can't remember what I need to buy.

✓ No, I don't like to make a list when I go shopping because I have a good memory, so I can remember what I need to buy.

'Remember' is a verb, but the sentence requires a noun to describe the ability to recall. The correct noun is 'memory'. Using 'a good remember' is incorrect. Suggestion: replace 'a good remember' with 'a good memory'.

× I like to shop spontaneously, observing and exploring the disk out of the shop.

✓ I like to shop spontaneously, observing and exploring the aisles of the shop.

The phrase 'exploring the disk out of the shop' is unclear and uses incorrect prepositions. Likely, the intended meaning is exploring the aisles or sections inside the shop. Suggestion: use 'exploring the aisles of the shop'.

× You solicit an app to send with friendly reminder, and when I make the list for work, I feel well organized.

✓ I use an app that sends friendly reminders, and when I make the list for work, I feel well organized.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'You solicit an app to send with friendly reminder' which is unclear and uses 'you' instead of 'I'. Also, 'solicit' is not appropriate here. Suggestion: use 'I use an app that sends friendly reminders'.

× I feel a sense of accomplishment when I completed work.

✓ I feel a sense of accomplishment when I complete work.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I feel' with past tense 'completed'. To maintain consistency, use present tense 'complete' to match 'I feel'. Suggestion: use 'when I complete work'.

× I think some people have good remember.

✓ I think some people have good memory.

'Remember' is a verb, but here a noun 'memory' is needed to describe the ability. Suggestion: replace 'good remember' with 'good memory'.

× Yes, they have good remember and don't like to like a making list like like worker freely. And spontaneously.

✓ Yes, they have good memory and don't like to make a list; they prefer to work freely and spontaneously.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'good remember' should be 'good memory'; 'don't like to like a making list like like worker freely' is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning is that they don't like making lists and prefer to work freely and spontaneously. Suggestion: rephrase for clarity and correct grammar.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than other paper on paper because I have a smartphone and only there is so much apps I use absolute send me reminders my watching list.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because I have a smartphone and there are many apps that send me reminders for my shopping list.

The original sentence misuses prepositions ('other paper on paper'), has unclear phrasing ('only there is so much apps'), and incorrect word choice ('absolute send me reminders my watching list'). Suggestion: use 'rather than on paper', 'there are many apps', and 'send me reminders for my shopping list'.

× Anna, if you use papers you have to bring with you all the time.

✓ Also, if you use paper, you have to bring it with you all the time.

'Anna' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'Also'. 'Papers' should be 'paper' as an uncountable noun here. 'Bring with you all the time' needs 'it' as the object pronoun. Suggestion: use 'Also, if you use paper, you have to bring it with you all the time.'