列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I enjoy browsing freely. Moreover, I like to decide on discounts and offers while shopping, which helps me choose what to buy. Therefore, making a list might limit my shopping experience.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some contradictions and grammatical errors. Make sure your sentences are clear and consistent. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

範例: Yes, I sometimes make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. When I have many tasks to complete, making a list allows me to work more efficiently and not forget anything.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your points clearly with proper sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to explain reasons logically. Provide specific reasons why some people avoid lists.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work independently and follow their own pace. Also, they may remember their tasks well and feel that lists are unnecessary, which helps them use their time efficiently.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear words like 'pig'. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain your preference clearly.

範例: Usually, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can carry it anywhere. However, sometimes I use paper lists when I don't have access to my phone.

× And I like to experience the freedom of shopping and while purchasing the products I'll.

✓ And I like to experience the freedom of shopping and while purchasing the products.

The phrase 'I'll' is incomplete and incorrect here. It seems to be a fragment or typo. Removing 'I'll' corrects the sentence structure and maintains the present participle form 'purchasing' correctly.

× I don't make lesby 'cause I am more of a.

✓ I don't make lists because I am more of a person who likes to shop freely.

The word 'lesby' is likely a misspelling of 'lists'. Also, the sentence is incomplete. Correcting 'lesby' to 'lists' and completing the sentence improves clarity and corrects the singular/plural issue.

× What awful person who likes a discount to guide whither I should shop it.

✓ I am the kind of person who likes discounts to guide whether I should shop or not.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reconstructing it into a complete sentence with proper subject and verb improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I do make list when there are lots of things that I have to do and complete.

✓ I do make lists when there are lots of things that I have to do and complete.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'lots of things' and the context of multiple tasks.

× it helped me to do work efficiently.

✓ it helps me to do work efficiently.

The sentence is in present tense context, so 'helped' (past tense) should be 'helps' (present tense) to maintain tense consistency.

× So making a list doesn't work and it is more efficient than not making a list.

✓ So making a list works and is more efficient than not making a list.

The original sentence contradicts itself by saying 'doesn't work' and then 'more efficient'. Correcting 'doesn't work' to 'works' aligns the meaning logically.

× Some people likes to work independently and not accordingly to not according to the list they make.

✓ Some people like to work independently and not according to the list they make.

The verb 'likes' should be 'like' to agree with the plural subject 'people'. Also, removing redundant phrases improves clarity.

× So most of the people don't make like making a list and yeah, they also remember the things they have to do without getting confused and.

✓ So most people don't like making a list and they also remember the things they have to do without getting confused.

Correcting 'don't make like making' to 'don't like making' fixes the verb usage and improves sentence clarity.

× Usually I prefer the phone to make a list, but sometimes I also make list on a paper when I I don't have a.

✓ Usually I prefer the phone to make a list, but sometimes I also make a list on paper when I don't have access to my phone.

The phrase 'make list on a paper' should be 'make a list on paper'. Also, completing the sentence and correcting preposition use improves clarity.

× Making a list of phone is very accessible to 'cause you can carry your phone wherever you go and not like a pig.

✓ Making a list on the phone is very accessible because you can carry your phone wherever you go, unlike a notebook.

The phrase 'of phone' should be 'on the phone'. Also, 'not like a pig' is unclear and likely a misstatement; replacing it with 'unlike a notebook' makes the meaning clear. Correcting pronoun and article use improves the sentence.