列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and redundancy. For example, explain why making a list helps you when shopping and how it benefits you.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the items I need. For instance, it prevents me from forgetting important things and saves time. Therefore, making a list makes my shopping more organized and efficient.

建議: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then explain how making a list helps your work with specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid grammatical errors.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I start a new task at work. This helps me manage my time effectively and prioritize my duties. As a result, I can complete my work more efficiently and avoid forgetting important tasks.

建議: Your answer should be clearer and more natural. Begin with a direct answer, then provide specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring or believe they can remember everything. Additionally, they may not know how to create an effective list. However, making lists can actually help improve organization and reduce stress.

建議: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Start with a clear preference, then explain reasons with specific details and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and redundancy.

範例: I prefer to make my lists on my phone because it is convenient to carry and easy to access anytime. In contrast, paper lists can be lost or forgotten, which makes digital lists more reliable for me.

× Yes, I make a list when I want to stop.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I want to shop.

The word 'stop' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'shop' to match the question about shopping. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but correcting it is necessary for clarity.

× It is helpful to buy some things that I want come on mind at that time.

✓ It is helpful to buy some things that come to my mind at that time.

The phrase 'want come on mind' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'come to my mind'. Also, 'want' is unnecessary here. Using the correct verb phrase improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But when we are at home we make some plan to ***.

✓ But when we are at home, we make some plans.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear due to '***'. Removing the unclear part and correcting 'plan' to plural 'plans' fits the context better. Also, a comma after 'home' improves sentence structure.

× So imeca list it helps too much to buy something.

✓ So, making a list helps a lot to buy something.

The phrase 'imeca list' is unclear and likely a typo. Replacing it with 'making a list' and correcting 'too much' to 'a lot' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× Yes, always I make a list when I am starting to work something knew.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I am starting to work on something new.

The adverb 'always' should come before the verb 'make'. 'Knew' is the past tense of 'know' but the correct adjective here is 'new'. Also, 'work something' should be 'work on something' for correct preposition usage.

× It helps to customize the time and it helps to maintain our time management who's helps to improve my works.

✓ It helps to organize time and maintain our time management, which helps to improve my work.

'Customize the time' is awkward; 'organize time' is better. 'Who's' is incorrect; the correct relative pronoun is 'which'. 'Works' should be singular 'work' when referring to tasks or job performance.

× Some people don't like making list because they don't have any idea how to make list.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they don't have any idea how to make a list.

'List' should be plural 'lists' when talking generally. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list' to be grammatically correct.

× If they had to idea to make list, it is very helpful for them.

✓ If they had the idea to make a list, it would be very helpful for them.

The sentence is a conditional sentence referring to an unreal past condition, so 'had' is correct but the main clause should be in conditional form 'would be'. Also, 'to idea' should be 'the idea' and 'make list' should be 'make a list'.

× They feel it is boring and they're very intelligent to remand the items what they want to buy, so they don't make list.

✓ They feel it is boring and they are very confident to remember the items they want to buy, so they don't make a list.

'Remand' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remember'. 'What' should be 'that' or omitted. 'Make list' should be 'make a list'. 'Intelligent' is not appropriate here; 'confident' fits better.

× I usually make my list on my phone because it is a very easy to bring from one place to another place and it is easy to see on phone.

✓ I usually make my list on my phone because it is very easy to carry from one place to another and it is easy to see on the phone.

'Easy to bring' is incorrect; 'easy to carry' is better. 'From one place to another place' is redundant; 'from one place to another' suffices. 'See on phone' should be 'see on the phone' with the definite article.

× But if we have on paper it is we knew very fear where that is gone so.

✓ But if we have it on paper, we know very well where it is, so...

The original sentence is unclear and contains many errors. Correcting 'we knew' to 'we know', 'very fear' to 'very well', and adding missing pronouns and commas improves clarity and grammatical correctness.