列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and a bit long without a clear topic sentence. Try to start directly by answering the question, then add a reason or example. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I don't usually make a list when I shop because I often buy things spontaneously after my mom calls me to ask for groceries. This way, it feels more practical and saves time.

建議: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making a to-do list helps you. Use linking words and avoid repetition. Also, check your sentence structure and article usage.

範例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list before starting work because it helps me stay organized and plan my day effectively. I recommend this habit to everyone as it really improves productivity.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete with fragmented sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly with complete sentences. Use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand' properly. Provide specific reasons and avoid vague phrases.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or boring. However, others prefer lists as they help them use their time wisely and shop more mindfully.

建議: Your answer is generally good but has some minor errors and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words and ensure sentence completeness.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone nowadays because the Notes app is very convenient and user-friendly. Since we always carry our phones, it is more practical than using a paper notebook as we did before.

× But whenever I am outside, if I get a call from my mom, very often that if we need something in my home for groceries or anything else, I do it spontaneously without making a list because it is more practical in that way.

✓ But whenever I am outside and get a call from my mom, very often she asks if we need something for groceries or anything else at home, so I do it spontaneously without making a list because it is more practical that way.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper structure, making it difficult to understand. The phrase 'very often that if we need something' is incorrect and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning by restructuring the sentence to show cause and effect clearly.

× So I usually.

✓ So I usually do.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it a sentence fragment. Adding 'do' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× I usually make A to do list before start of my work because it helps me keep organized an well planned for the entire day at my work also.

✓ I usually make a to-do list before the start of my work because it helps me stay organized and well planned for the entire day at work.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'before start of my work' needs the definite article 'the' before 'start'. 'Keep organized an well planned' should be 'stay organized and well planned' for correct collocation and spelling.

× I should recommend that everyone should make A to do list because it. Really helps an. Small.

✓ I would recommend that everyone make a to-do list because it really helps a small amount.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I should recommend' is better as 'I would recommend'. 'Make A to do list' needs 'a' lowercase and hyphenated. The phrase 'it. Really helps an. Small.' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to a clearer expression.

× Maybe it's people consider it as time consuming or boring.

✓ Maybe people consider it time-consuming or boring.

The phrase 'consider it as' is incorrect; 'consider it' should be followed directly by the adjective or noun without 'as'. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× Maybe it's not their cup of tea, but on the other hand, some people really love making a list before going for shopping because they feel it mindful and time. Utilization. Proper use of time utilization while going for shopping.

✓ Maybe it's not their cup of tea, but on the other hand, some people really love making a list before going shopping because they feel it is mindful and helps with proper time utilization while shopping.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. 'Going for shopping' should be 'going shopping'. The phrase 'feel it mindful and time. Utilization.' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to a complete and clear sentence.

× I remember there was a time where we used to sit in the family and we used to have a special notebook on which we used to make list for groceries.

✓ I remember there was a time when we used to sit as a family and we used to have a special notebook in which we used to make a list for groceries.

'Sit in the family' is incorrect; it should be 'sit as a family'. 'Where' should be 'when' for time reference. 'Make list for groceries' needs the article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'on which' is better replaced with 'in which' for a notebook.