列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant phrases like 'Are you Shelly?' and 'Be hard.' Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, I can avoid forgetting important items and shop more efficiently.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains errors like 'dislike to make a list for my walk' and 'waffle randomly.' Please answer the question directly and use correct vocabulary. Explain your reason clearly with linking words.

範例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to handle tasks spontaneously. However, sometimes this approach can make me less organised.

建議: Your answer has several mistakes and unclear phrases like 'waist high' and 'Spondee.' Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to connect your points.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to do things spontaneously instead.

建議: Your answer contains unclear and irrelevant parts like 'but not Bieber.' Please answer directly and clearly. Use proper linking words and explain your preference with specific reasons.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's more convenient than using paper.

× Yes. Are you Shelly? Make a list before I go shopping. Be hard. It helps me remember everything I need. This way don't forget an important item and can shop more officially.

✓ Yes. I make a list before I go shopping. It is hard. It helps me remember everything I need. This way, I don't forget an important item and can shop more efficiently.

The original sentences have sentence fragments and unclear references. 'Are you Shelly?' is irrelevant and confusing here. 'Be hard' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'It is hard' or 'It can be hard'. The phrase 'This way don't forget' lacks a subject; it should be 'This way, I don't forget'. Also, 'shop more officially' is incorrect; 'shop more efficiently' or 'effectively' is appropriate. Improving sentence structure and clarity is necessary.

× No. I dislike to make a list for my walk. I waffle randomly.

✓ No. I dislike making a list for my work. I waffle randomly.

The phrase 'dislike to make' is incorrect; after 'dislike', the gerund form 'making' should be used. Also, 'for my walk' is likely a typo for 'for my work'. 'Waffle randomly' is informal but acceptable here. Correcting preposition and verb form improves grammatical accuracy.

× Some people don't like making list becaused they feel it waist high and prefer to do thing. Spondee.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they feel it wastes time and prefer to do things spontaneously.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' to match plural form. 'Becaused' is a typo for 'because'. 'Waist high' is incorrect; likely intended 'wastes time'. 'Do thing' should be 'do things'. 'Spondee' is unclear and likely irrelevant. Correcting plural forms and word choice improves clarity and grammar.

× I like to make a list on my phone more be 'cause we take our phone to anywhere but not Bieber.

✓ I like to make a list on my phone more because we take our phone everywhere but not paper.

'Be 'cause' is informal; 'because' is preferred. 'Take our phone to anywhere' is incorrect; 'take our phone everywhere' is correct. 'But not Bieber' is likely a typo for 'but not paper'. Correcting prepositions and word choice clarifies meaning.