列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คำตอบควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยควรตอบตรงคำถามและหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่ชัดเจนหรือผิดไวยากรณ์ เช่น การใช้คำว่า 'make list' ควรเป็น 'make a list' และควรจัดระเบียบประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และมีความเชื่อมโยงกัน

範例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time. For example, after school, I make a list of my assignments to stay organized.

建議: ควรใช้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'make lids' ควรเป็น 'make lists' และควรขยายคำตอบให้ชัดเจนขึ้นโดยใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

範例: As a student, I always make lists for my school assignments. This helps me manage my time better and stay organized, which ultimately saves me time.

建議: คำตอบไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ ควรปรับปรุงให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่ออธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult or uncomfortable. However, I believe making lists is essential because it helps save time and keeps you focused on your tasks.

建議: ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'convertible' ควรเป็น 'convenient' และจัดประโยคให้สมบูรณ์ พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของคำตอบ

範例: Personally, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient when I am outdoors or doing activities. Also, I can check my list anytime easily.

× Personally, I always make list before I go to shopping or go do something.

✓ Personally, I always make a list before I go shopping or do something.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'.

× Personally, I always make list before I go to shopping or go do something.

✓ Personally, I always make a list before I go shopping or do something.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'to'.

× Such ads.

✓ Such as that.

The phrase 'Such ads.' is incomplete and unclear. It seems the speaker intended to say 'Such as that' or 'Such as these', to give examples.

× After the school I always make a list of the assignments of school or tots be 'cause I think it's a essential so.

✓ After school, I always make a list of the assignments for school or tasks because I think it's essential.

The phrase 'assignments of school' should be 'assignments for school'. 'Tots be' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation of 'tasks'. Also, 'a essential' is incorrect; 'essential' starts with a vowel sound and requires 'an'.

× I think it's a essential so.

✓ I think it's essential.

The article 'a' before 'essential' is incorrect because 'essential' begins with a vowel sound; it should be 'an essential' or simply 'essential' without an article.

× Personally I am student, I always make lids for assignments of school.

✓ Personally, I am a student. I always make lists for school assignments.

The phrase 'I am student' is missing the article 'a'. 'Make lids' is likely a mispronunciation of 'make lists'. 'Assignments of school' should be 'school assignments'.

× And I think it's a help to manage time an organized and save time.

✓ And I think it's helpful to manage time, stay organized, and save time.

The phrase 'it's a help' is awkward; 'helpful' is more appropriate. 'An organized' is incorrect; it should be 'stay organized'.

× For me, I think some people may be thinking is hard an.

✓ For me, I think some people may think it is hard.

The phrase 'may be thinking is hard an' is ungrammatical. It should be 'may think it is hard'.

× Is not comfort table.

✓ It is not comfortable.

The phrase 'comfort table' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'.

× But I think it's a very essential.

✓ But I think it's very essential.

The word 'essential' is an adjective here and does not require the article 'a'.

× Because it helped to save time in.

✓ Because it helps to save time.

The phrase 'helped to save time in' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct form is 'helps to save time'.

× You can do you can know what. Show.

✓ You can know what to do and show.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be restructured for clarity.

× Personally I prefer make list on my phone because it I think is a convertible when I go out door or go do activity to do something.

✓ Personally, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it is convenient when I go outdoors or do activities.

The phrase 'prefer make list' should be 'prefer to make a list'. 'A convertible' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'convenient'. 'Go out door' should be 'go outdoors'.

× Anne. An I can know right now.

✓ And I can know right now.

'Anne' and 'An' are likely mispronunciations of 'And'.