列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and direct by clearly stating why you make a list and giving a specific example. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to help me remember what I need. For instance, when I buy groceries, I write down the items and their quantities so I don't forget anything.

建議: Your answer is fragmented and difficult to understand. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about how making a list helps you at work.

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work, and it helps me a lot. It prevents me from forgetting important tasks and allows me to track what I have completed and what is still pending.

建議: Your answer has some repetition and incomplete thoughts. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to explain reasons. Also, finish your sentences fully.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and stressful. They prefer to focus on completing tasks quickly without writing them down. However, I think making lists helps me stay organized.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to give a clear preference and explain why, using complete sentences and linking words.

範例: I have tried using my phone to make lists for a couple of months, but I often forget tasks because carrying my phone everywhere is cumbersome. Therefore, I prefer writing lists on paper since it is more convenient and helps me remember better.

× Yes, I do make a list when I do shopping.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'do shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' because 'shopping' here is a noun and the verb 'go' is used with activities like shopping. Using 'do' with 'shopping' is a common mistake but not grammatically correct.

× For example, if I'm shopping whose amount of product I have to make a list to guide me.

✓ For example, if I'm shopping and the amount of products is large, I have to make a list to guide me.

The original sentence misuses 'whose' which is a relative pronoun for people or animals, not for 'amount of product'. Also, the sentence structure is unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses proper conjunction and noun forms.

× Actually making, at least for my work, has really helped me. To avoid. Forgetting. Pending procedures since ominous. A to do list usually help help help me. To be able to track. What things have done and waiting?

✓ Actually, making a to-do list, at least for my work, has really helped me to avoid forgetting pending procedures. A to-do list usually helps me to be able to track what things I have done and what is still waiting.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. Also, 'help help help' is a repetition error. The correction combines fragments into coherent sentences, fixes subject-verb agreement ('helps'), and clarifies meaning.

× Some people don't like making A to do list because they feel it's more time consuming and also. It's it's provide a stress to them so they just have to avoid because they want to to complete a task and forget about it.

✓ Some people don't like making a to-do list because they feel it's more time-consuming and also it causes stress to them, so they just avoid it because they want to complete a task and forget about it.

The original sentence has errors in article usage ('A to do list' should be 'a to-do list'), repetition ('It's it's'), and awkward phrasing ('provide a stress'). The correction fixes these issues and improves clarity.

× Have tried for couple of month to use a phone but eventually it makes me forget some things to do because carrying my phone everywhere it quite cumbersome.

✓ I have tried for a couple of months to use a phone, but eventually it made me forget some things to do because carrying my phone everywhere is quite cumbersome.

The original sentence lacks the subject 'I' at the beginning, misses articles ('a couple of months'), and has tense inconsistency ('makes' should be 'made' to match past experience). Also, 'it quite cumbersome' is missing the verb 'is'. The correction addresses these issues.

× Cumbersome but when I write in paper it so helpful because the paper is.

✓ It is cumbersome, but when I write on paper, it is so helpful because the paper is tangible.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks subject and verb in the first clause. Also, 'write in paper' should be 'write on paper'. The correction completes the sentence and fixes preposition use.