列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. For example, say: "Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need."

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

建議: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to clearly state your main idea and support it with specific details using linking words. For example: "Yes, I use a reminder app on my phone to make lists for work. This helps me organize my schedule and communicate tasks to management effectively."

範例: Yes, I use a reminder app on my phone to make lists for work. This helps me organize my schedule logically and keep management informed about my tasks.

建議: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words. For example: "Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive or time-consuming. However, others prefer lists to plan their day more logically."

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their flexibility. On the other hand, many find lists helpful to organize their tasks efficiently.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains pronunciation and grammar errors. Try to use clear sentences and provide reasons with linking words. For example: "I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient than using paper and pen."

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I can easily edit or delete items compared to using paper.

× Yes, I do make a list will enable me to buy the cracked least ARF and I won't forgot something.

✓ Yes, I do make a list which enables me to buy the correct list and I won't forget something.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'will enable' instead of 'which enables' to describe the purpose of making a list. Also, 'forgot' is the past tense, but the sentence requires the base form 'forget' after 'won't'. The phrase 'cracked least ARF' seems to be a mishearing or typo; it is corrected to 'correct list' to make sense. The correction uses the present participle form 'enables' to agree with the singular subject 'a list' and corrects the verb form after 'won't'.

× Yes, I do make a list will enable me to buy the cracked least ARF and I won't forgot something.

✓ Yes, I do make a list which enables me to buy the correct list and I won't forget something.

The verb 'forgot' is the past tense, but after 'won't' (will not), the base form 'forget' should be used. This is a common modal verb usage rule where the base form follows modal verbs.

× Yes I do. I will make some news on app named reminder in my phone. So make a list for my work enable me to. Tell management and make my schedule logically.

✓ Yes, I do. I will make some notes on an app named Reminder on my phone. So making a list for my work enables me to tell management and make my schedule logically.

The phrase 'make some news' is incorrect; it should be 'make some notes'. The sentence 'So make a list for my work enable me to.' is incomplete and ungrammatical. It is corrected to 'So making a list for my work enables me to...' using the gerund 'making' to indicate the action and 'enables' to agree with the singular subject. Also, 'Reminder' as an app name should be capitalized and 'on my phone' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I'm I'm North Shore Chris. I have no some people so but I guess the and the like they enjoy making list due to the same reason as me.

✓ I'm Chris from North Shore. I don't know some people, but I guess they enjoy making lists for the same reason as me.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect pronoun usage, such as 'I have no some people' and 'the and the like they'. It is corrected to 'I don't know some people' and 'they enjoy making lists' to clarify meaning and correct pronoun use. Also, 'making list' is corrected to 'making lists' to agree in number.

× They want to mix here, schedule mixture, plant more logically.

✓ They want to mix their schedule, plan more logically.

The phrase 'mix here, schedule mixture, plant more logically' is ungrammatical and unclear. It is corrected to 'mix their schedule' and 'plan more logically' to use correct verbs and possessive pronouns. 'Plant' is a mishearing or typo for 'plan'.

× Actually I prefer micalis on my phone instead of meekly some paper.

✓ Actually, I prefer making lists on my phone instead of making lists on paper.

The words 'micalis' and 'meekly' appear to be misheard or misspelled. They are corrected to 'making lists' to make sense in context. The pronoun 'my' is used correctly with 'phone' but missing with 'paper', so 'on paper' is used without 'some' which is unnecessary here.

× If I want to make this on paper I I need a pencil or pen.

✓ If I want to make this on paper, I need a pencil or pen.

A comma is added after the introductory clause for clarity. The sentence is otherwise correct in preposition use.

× But if I can make this on my phone so it's more convenient.

✓ But if I can make this on my phone, it's more convenient.

The conjunction 'so' is unnecessary after 'if' clause and is removed. A comma is added after the 'if' clause for clarity.