列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议练习简单句型，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. For example, if I see good products, I will buy them immediately.

建議: 回答内容混乱，语法错误严重，缺乏逻辑。建议先明确回答问题，然后用简单句子说明原因或举例。

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because I am a teacher. For example, I prepare lesson plans and schedules to teach my students effectively.

建議: 回答不连贯，表达不清楚。建议用简单句表达观点，并用具体原因或例子支持。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time. For example, they prefer to do things spontaneously rather than following a schedule.

建議: 回答表达不流畅，语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，说明理由，并用具体例子支持。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient. For example, I can easily add or delete items anytime and carry my phone everywhere.

× I don't like make him otherwise because I already showed him on light.

✓ I don't like making lists because I already showed him the light.

这里动词短语需要使用动名词形式'making'，而不是动词原形'make'。动词后面接动名词表示喜欢或不喜欢做某事。

× For example, I already or yours are sharp.

✓ For example, I already have some sharp ones.

这里需要使用复数形式来表示多个物品，'or yours'不合适，应改为复数名词。

× I see a good goods.

✓ I see good goods.

'a'用于单数名词，'goods'是复数名词，不能与'a'连用。

× I I will.

✓ I will.

重复的'I'应去掉，保持句子简洁。

× Yes, I already I already too making working tables be 'cause I'm on doesn't teacher.

✓ Yes, I am already making working tables because I am a teacher.

动词后应使用动名词形式'making'，并且句子结构需要调整使其通顺。

× For example I already are making dancing on.

✓ For example, I am already making dance plans.

'are making dancing'结构不正确，'dancing'应改为名词或动词不定式形式，且主谓一致需要调整。

× Take table team to teach students.

✓ I take the table team to teach students.

句子缺少主语，且需要加定冠词'the'使句子完整。

× I don't like making levels because I think it can get me a lot of price.

✓ I don't like making lists because I think it can cost me a lot of money.

'making levels'应为'making lists'，'price'用法不当，应改为'money'。

× For example I can I can follow the table time to to do.

✓ For example, I can follow the timetable to do things.

句子结构混乱，重复词语需删除，'table time'应为'timetable'。

× On some things, but I don't like.

✓ I don't like it for some things.

句子不完整，需补充主语和谓语使其完整。

× Anna cues on my phone because I think it is a convenience that is that yours making my phone for example, I already can watching table lives on my phone, so I think it's a very convenient.

✓ I use my phone because I think it is convenient. For example, I can watch live tables on my phone, so I think it's very convenient.

'Anna cues'不合适，应为'I use'，'yours making'错误，'can watching'应为'can watch'，句子需要简化和调整代词使用。