列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit short and could be more natural. Try to add a linking word and a specific reason to make your answer more effective. For example, you can say why making a list helps you.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need, so I don't waste time going back to the store.

建議: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and is a bit unclear. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it really works for me because I don't forget important tasks when I write them down. Therefore, making a list helps me stay organized.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has grammar errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words to explain your ideas logically. Avoid repeating phrases and be more specific.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things in their head, so they feel making a list is unnecessary or time-consuming.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has many grammar mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference logically.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me, so I won't lose the list like I might if it's on paper. This makes it easier to check my list anytime.

× Yes I do make a list for my work and it is really works for me because I don't forget things I do for getting.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work and it really works for me because I don't forget things I need to get.

The phrase 'it is really works' is incorrect because 'works' is a third person singular verb and should not be used with 'is'. The correct form is 'it really works'. Also, 'things I do for getting' is awkward; 'things I need to get' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So whenever I make it least I don't forget this.

✓ So whenever I make the list, I don't forget anything.

The phrase 'make it least' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make the list'. Also, 'I don't forget this' is vague; 'I don't forget anything' is clearer and more appropriate.

× I don't know, I don't have an idea, but I think some people don't make it, least they don't like making this cause.

✓ I don't know, I don't have an idea, but I think some people don't make lists because they don't like making them.

The pronouns 'it' and 'this cause' are incorrectly used. 'Make it, least' should be 'make lists', and 'making this cause' should be 'making them'. This correction clarifies the meaning and uses correct pronouns.

× I think they know everything they want to get in their head.

✓ I think they know everything they want to get in their heads.

The phrase 'in their head' should be plural 'in their heads' because 'they' refers to multiple people, so the possessive noun should be plural.

× I don't think they need to just sit down or just sit on their phone.

✓ I don't think they need to just sit down or just use their phone.

The phrase 'sit on their phone' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'use their phone'.

× I love I love to make a list on my phone because if I should put it on paper and I lost it on my way going or I might miss places.

✓ I love to make a list on my phone because if I put it on paper and lose it on my way, I might miss places.

The phrase 'if I should put it on paper' is awkward; 'if I put it on paper' is better. 'I lost it on my way going' should be 'lose it on my way'. Also, 'miss places' is unclear but acceptable here meaning 'forget places'.

× I might miss please where I put it in my love get you remember where I put it.

✓ I might miss places where I put it and not remember where I put it.

The phrase 'miss please' is a typo for 'miss places'. 'In my love get you remember' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'and not remember'.

× But my phone is my aunt said I hold it anywhere I go so it is easily for me.

✓ But my phone is with me; I hold it wherever I go, so it is easy for me.

The phrase 'my aunt said' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. 'I hold it anywhere I go' is acceptable but 'wherever I go' is better. 'It is easily for me' should be 'it is easy for me'.

× So open my phone and get the list.

✓ So I open my phone and get the list.

The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'I' clarifies the action.