列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors, which affects the naturalness and effectiveness of your response. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. I trust my memory to remind me of what I need, so I find making a list unnecessary.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. You should respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and provide supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid fragmented sentences.

範例: No, I don't make a list for my work because I am not currently employed. However, I believe that making a list can help workers stay organized and complete their tasks efficiently.

建議: Your answer has some good ideas but is incomplete and lacks coherence. Try to express your ideas clearly using complete sentences and linking words. Provide specific reasons and consequences to support your opinion.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to go with the flow and be spontaneous. However, if they don't make lists, they might forget important tasks and fall behind in their work.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and link your ideas smoothly. Also, provide specific reasons to support your preference.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me wherever I go. This way, I can easily access and update my lists anytime, which is more convenient than using paper.

× No, I don't make a list for stopping.

✓ No, I don't make a list for shopping.

The word 'stopping' is incorrect here; the correct preposition and noun should be 'shopping' to indicate the activity of buying items.

× I go free Leanne when whenever I guess my eyes I.

✓ I go free lane whenever I guess my eyes.

The sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases. It likely intends to say 'I go free lane whenever I close my eyes' or similar. The original sentence lacks proper structure and clarity.

× I remember everything what I need, so I don't think I will. Make a list.

✓ I remember everything I need, so I don't think I will make a list.

The phrase 'everything what I need' is incorrect; 'what' should be omitted. Also, the sentence is fragmented; 'Make a list' should be part of the previous sentence.

× No, I don't make a list for work.

✓ No, I don't make a list at work.

The preposition 'for' is less appropriate here; 'at work' better indicates the location or context where the list might be made.

× Says I'm not a worker at my screen so I don't have any idea of this, but yeah.

✓ Since I'm not a worker at my screen, I don't have any idea about this, but yeah.

The sentence uses 'Says' incorrectly and 'at my screen' is awkward. 'Since' introduces the reason properly, and 'about this' is the correct preposition.

× I think worker make. Make sure make a list.

✓ I think workers make sure to make a list.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper subject-verb agreement and structure. The correction provides a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

× 'Cause they wanna go with the flow, so they don't wanna make make a list, but if.

✓ Because they want to go with the flow, so they don't want to make a list, but if they do,

The sentence is incomplete and uses informal contractions and repeated words. The correction uses proper conjunctions and completes the thought.

× They will go further then. Now if they don't want to make a list. Then they will have.

✓ They will go further than now. If they don't want to make a list, then they will have problems.

The sentence is fragmented and uses 'then' incorrectly instead of 'than'. The correction completes the sentence and fixes comparative structure.

× Yeah, I'm from her make a list on my phone, 'cause phone is with us always, every time, everywhere, whenever we go.

✓ Yeah, I prefer to make a list on my phone, because the phone is always with us, every time, everywhere we go.

The phrase 'I'm from her' is incorrect; 'I prefer' is appropriate. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formality, and 'phone is with us always' is better as 'the phone is always with us'.

× It took them with us. So phone it's. Better way to keep. May list on.

✓ We take it with us, so the phone is a better way to keep my list on.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into coherent sentences with proper pronouns and verb forms.