列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议练习用完整句子表达，并且避免重复和断断续续的表达。可以先用一句话直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I remember what I need. When I see the items, I just pick them up.

建議: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达混乱。建议用完整句子表达，明确说明是否制作清单以及清单是否有效。

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work. It helps me stay organized and complete my tasks on time.

建議: 回答没有直接回应问题，且表达不清晰。建议先直接回答为什么有些人不喜欢做清单，然后用具体理由支持。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things naturally.

建議: 回答简洁明了，但可以更丰富一些。建议增加具体原因或举例说明手机做清单的便利性。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily add or remove items anytime.

× Not really. When I go, when I go to the shop normally in my mind I know what do I need.

✓ Not really. When I go to the shop, I normally know in my mind what I need.

原句中“what do I need”是疑问句结构，但在陈述句中应使用陈述句语序“what I need”。此外，句子结构不够连贯，调整语序使句子更通顺。

× So when I saw it, I will take. Put my. Bank.

✓ So when I see it, I will take it and put it in my bag.

原句中时态混乱，“saw”是过去时，而后文用“will”，应统一时态。句子断裂且缺少必要成分，补充完整句子使其通顺。

× Yes, of course. I I used to write the list and do do my work when I finish. And I need to. Notice.

✓ Yes, of course. I usually write a list and do my work when I finish. And I need to take notes.

原句中“used to”表示过去习惯，与上下文时态不符，应改为“usually”。“do do”重复，应去掉多余部分。句子“when I finish”缺少宾语，补充完整。最后一句不完整，补充完整表达。

× Uh, yes, because if we made some list, can help me remember what?

✓ Uh, yes, because if we make some lists, it can help me remember what I need to do.

条件句中应使用一般现在时“make”，而非过去时“made”。缺少主语“it”，使句子完整。

× I prefer to make list on my phone because it's very convenient.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient.

“list”是可数名词，单数形式前应加冠词“a”。