列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "make sure list" and "note down the item that I need in our list." To improve, use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I like to shop with a clear purpose. I write down the items I need so I can prioritize and avoid forgetting anything.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, such as "mention list" and "self-confidence in watch." Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct verb forms. Also, explain how making lists helps you more specifically.

範例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for work because it helps me remember the tasks I need to complete each day. This way, I feel more organized and confident in managing my work.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incorrect word choices like "steroid mind" and "shipped them on their mind." To improve, use correct vocabulary and clearer explanations. Also, try to provide a more natural and logical response.

範例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they have a strong memory and prefer to remember things mentally rather than writing them down.

建議: Your answer is brief and contains unclear phrases like "I generate better." To improve, explain why using your phone is convenient and provide more details. Also, avoid incomplete sentences.

範例: Definitely, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily add or remove items anytime. It also helps me stay organized wherever I go.

× Actually yes, I usually make sure list when I shop because I'm a huge fan of shopping with purpose.

✓ Actually yes, I usually make a sure list when I shop because I'm a huge fan of shopping with purpose.

The phrase 'make sure list' is incorrect because 'sure' is an adjective and needs an article 'a' before it to form the noun phrase 'a sure list'. The correction adds the article 'a' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× So I try to note down the item that I need in our list and get things on priority.

✓ So I try to note down the items that I need in my list and get things on priority.

The word 'item' should be plural 'items' because it refers to multiple things. Also, 'our list' is incorrect as the list belongs to the speaker, so it should be 'my list'.

× To be honest, yes, I usually mention list for my work because it helps me to remember the items that I should done on that I should do on that specific day.

✓ To be honest, yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me to remember the items that I should do on that specific day.

The verb 'mention' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'make' when referring to creating a list. Also, 'should done' is incorrect; it should be 'should do' as 'should' is followed by the base form of the verb.

× Also it helps to increase my self-confidence in watch.

✓ Also, it helps to increase my self-confidence in work.

The word 'watch' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'work' to convey the intended meaning.

× In my prespective at some people don't like making list because they have a steroid mind and they easily can remember items and shipped them on their mind.

✓ In my perspective, some people don't like making lists because they have a strong mind and can easily remember items and keep them in their mind.

The phrase 'at some people' is incorrect; 'some people' is sufficient. 'Steroid mind' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'strong mind'. 'Shipped them on their mind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep them in their mind'. Also, 'making list' should be 'making lists' to match plural usage.

× Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

✓ Do you prefer to make a list on paper or on your phone?

The preposition 'on' is missing before 'your phone' to parallel the phrase 'on paper'. This correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Definitely, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient for me and I generate better. At least.

✓ Definitely, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient for me and I remember better, at least.

The phrase 'I generate better' is unclear and incorrect; likely the intended meaning is 'I remember better'. Also, 'At least' should be part of the sentence, not a separate fragment.