列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak langsung menjawab pertanyaan. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan fokus pada pertanyaan tentang membuat daftar saat berbelanja. Hindari kalimat yang tidak relevan dan perbaiki tata bahasa.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping to help me remember what I need to buy and avoid forgetting important items.

建議: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas tetapi kalimatnya agak berulang dan kurang lancar. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan tambahkan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it works well because it helps me organize my tasks and prepare myself to complete them efficiently.

建議: Jawaban Anda sangat tidak jelas dan sulit dimengerti. Cobalah untuk menyampaikan alasan dengan kalimat yang sederhana dan terstruktur, serta gunakan kosakata yang tepat untuk menjelaskan pendapat Anda.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and makes them feel pressured by time constraints.

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang lancar dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Perbaiki kalimat agar lebih jelas dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan alasan preferensi Anda.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it has an alarm feature that reminds me when to start or switch tasks, which is very useful.

× Some time I.

✓ Sometimes I.

The phrase 'Some time' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Some time' refers to an unspecified amount of time, while 'Sometimes' means occasionally.

× Usually make a wish make a list for my dial activities from wake up until I go to bed.

✓ I usually make a list of my daily activities from waking up until I go to bed.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has unclear wording ('make a wish make a list for my dial activities'). The correction adds the subject 'I' and corrects 'dial' to 'daily' and uses proper verb forms for clarity.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

A comma is needed after 'Yes' to separate the interjection from the rest of the sentence for correct punctuation.

× I make a list for my work and it is work because when I use the list for my job, I know how to prepare myself for doing something or.

✓ I make a list for my work and it works because when I use the list for my job, I know how to prepare myself to do something.

The phrase 'it is work' is incorrect; it should be 'it works' to indicate effectiveness. Also, 'prepare myself for doing something or' is incomplete and awkward; 'prepare myself to do something' is correct.

× Doing work well.

✓ I can do my work well.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. The correction forms a complete sentence with subject 'I' and verb 'can do'.

× Well, I think it is because please.

✓ Well, I think it is because people

The word 'please' is incorrect here; it should be 'people' to make sense in context.

× Make them, makes them so.

✓ Making them makes it so.

The original is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction uses gerund 'Making' as subject and correct verb agreement.

× In what is cage being kicked because it's encouraged with the time and limit the.

✓ They feel restricted because it is time-consuming and limiting.

The original sentence is incoherent. The correction interprets the intended meaning and forms a clear sentence.

× And then it's there.

✓ And then it's there.

This sentence is incomplete and unclear; however, without more context, no grammatical correction can be made.

× I prefer to make less on my phone because it is contains a an alarm so I know how to.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it contains an alarm so I know when to.

'Make less' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists' (plural). Also, 'it is contains a an alarm' is incorrect; correct is 'it contains an alarm'.

× When when I do something or when I move to another job it is so.

✓ When I do something or when I move to another task, it is very useful.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive ('When when'). The correction removes repetition and completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Useful to me.

✓ It is useful to me.

The original is a sentence fragment missing the subject 'It is'.