列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct expressions and avoiding redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, say "I usually don't make a shopping list because I don't shop often, but when I do, I prefer to have a list to avoid forgetting items."

範例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I don't shop often, but when I do, I prefer to have a list to avoid forgetting items.

建議: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and sentence structure, and by using linking words to make your explanation clearer and more coherent. For example, say "Yes, I am a big fan of making lists. I often use Microsoft OneNote to record important tasks, and I prioritize them to manage my work effectively."

範例: Yes, I am a big fan of making lists. I often use Microsoft OneNote to record important tasks, and I prioritize them to manage my work effectively.

建議: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say "Some people dislike making lists because it reminds them of many pending tasks, which can feel overwhelming and make it hard to start."

範例: Some people dislike making lists because it reminds them of many pending tasks, which can feel overwhelming and make it hard to start.

建議: Improve fluency and clarity by correcting grammar and word choice. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, say "I prefer to make lists digitally because I can manage all my lists on my computer, which syncs with my phone, allowing me to check updates easily without carrying a notebook."

範例: I prefer to make lists digitally because I can manage all my lists on my computer, which syncs with my phone, allowing me to check updates easily without carrying a notebook.

× I don't like to make this when I show up because normally I don't do lots of grocery shopping.

✓ I don't like to make this when I shop because normally I don't do lots of grocery shopping.

The phrase 'when I show up' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb is 'shop' to match the activity being discussed. 'Show up' means to arrive, which does not fit here.

× If I have to, I'll prefer to have a list with me in in case of forgetting something.

✓ If I have to, I prefer to have a list with me in case I forget something.

The modal verb 'will' is incorrectly used with 'prefer' here. 'Prefer' is a stative verb and does not usually take 'will' for future intention. Also, 'in in case of forgetting something' is awkward; 'in case I forget something' is correct.

× Well, I'm a huge fan of making list and I'm I'm a actually a heavy user of Microsoft.

✓ Well, I'm a huge fan of making lists and I'm actually a heavy user of Microsoft.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the general activity of making multiple lists. Also, 'I'm I'm a actually a' contains a repetition and misplaced article; corrected to 'I'm actually a'.

× One note, this tool helps me to record all of the important actions and actually my work will start from making list in.

✓ OneNote, this tool helps me record all of the important actions, and actually my work starts with making lists.

'One note' should be 'OneNote' (proper noun). 'Helps me to record' is better as 'helps me record'. 'My work will start from making list in' is awkward; corrected to 'my work starts with making lists' for clarity and correct tense.

× I will also make this sequence based on their priority order.

✓ I will also arrange this sequence based on its priority order.

The pronoun 'their' does not agree with the singular noun 'sequence'. It should be 'its' to match singular 'sequence'.

× This is is essentially help.

✓ This essentially helps.

The phrase 'This is is essentially help' is ungrammatical and redundant. Corrected to 'This essentially helps' to form a proper sentence.

× I feel some people may feel overwhelmed when they have to do the leasing an make preparation for their job because once the others started to make least it means that they have so many things waiting to do and often people feel hard to start which is to start from making list and make it plans.

✓ I feel some people may feel overwhelmed when they have to do the leasing and make preparations for their job because once others start to make lists, it means they have many things waiting to be done, and often people find it hard to start, which is to start by making lists and planning.

Multiple errors: 'leasing an' should be 'leasing and'; 'make preparation' should be plural 'make preparations'; 'the others' is better as 'others'; 'make least' should be 'make lists'; 'so many things waiting to do' should be 'many things waiting to be done'; 'people feel hard to start' should be 'people find it hard to start'; 'making list and make it plans' corrected to 'making lists and planning' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I'm a digital user so I would really prefer that I can manage my all lists for work for life on my computer.

✓ I'm a digital user, so I really prefer to manage all my lists for work and life on my computer.

'I would really prefer that I can manage' is awkward; 'I really prefer to manage' is correct. 'My all lists' should be 'all my lists'. 'For work for life' corrected to 'for work and life' for clarity.

× It also connects with my phone SIM you tenuously, so whenever I have to check for an update of the progress I can easily pull them out instead of carrying a notebook around.

✓ It also connects to my phone SIM continuously, so whenever I have to check for an update on the progress, I can easily pull them up instead of carrying a notebook around.

'Connects with' should be 'connects to' when referring to devices. 'SIM you tenuously' is a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'SIM continuously'. 'Check for an update of the progress' should be 'check for an update on the progress'. 'Pull them out' is better as 'pull them up' when referring to digital lists.