列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, I make a list. May I go shopping? I find it really convenient and it helps saves time when it comes to picking stuff. I normally categorized them by dangerous age, such as toiletries. Foods. Anne. Personal items.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
No, I don't normally make a list for my break. But I have other ways of remembering my schedule, such as. Putting off my schedule in my calendar and putting it on reminder so I'll know what I need to do the next week or upcoming event.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Some people dislike making less because they can feel overwhelming, create pressure due to perfectionism. Or a date is like it go to negative absolute association. From chores or past failures.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer making a list on my phone. It is often better than making it on paper due to its accessibility. Are we need to update them anywhere and is real time sync. Along with its crucial reminders and notifications.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 55.0建議: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยควรตอบตรงคำถามและหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้องหรือผิดพลาด เช่น 'May I go shopping?' และคำว่า 'dangerous age' ที่ไม่เหมาะสม ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงข้อมูลด้วยคำเชื่อม เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so' เพื่อให้คำตอบมีความลื่นไหลและเข้าใจง่าย
範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and avoid forgetting important items. I usually organize the list by categories such as toiletries, food, and personal items to make shopping more efficient.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 60.0建議: คำตอบควรตอบตรงคำถามและใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด เช่น 'but' หรือ 'so' และควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'putting off' ควรเป็น 'putting' หรือ 'putting in' นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่เหมาะสมและเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนขึ้น
範例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work tasks. However, I use my calendar app to schedule my activities and set reminders, so I can keep track of my upcoming events and deadlines effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 50.0建議: คำตอบควรใช้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'making less' ควรเป็น 'making lists' และควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงกันอย่างมีเหตุผล ควรอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น 'because' หรือ 'due to' เพื่อให้คำตอบมีความสมบูรณ์และเข้าใจง่าย
範例: Some people don't like making lists because they can feel overwhelmed or pressured to be perfect. Also, they might associate lists with negative experiences like chores or past failures, which makes them avoid using lists.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 65.0建議: คำตอบควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงกันอย่างชัดเจน เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so' และควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'are we need' ควรเป็น 'we can update' หรือ 'it allows us to update' นอกจากนี้ควรอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างละเอียดและเป็นธรรมชาติ
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more accessible and convenient. I can update my lists anytime and they sync in real time. Plus, my phone provides important reminders and notifications to help me stay organized.
文法
× May I go shopping? I find it really convenient and it helps saves time when it comes to picking stuff.
✓ May I go shopping? I find it really convenient and it helps save time when it comes to picking stuff.
The verb 'helps' should be followed by the base form 'save' not 'saves' because after 'helps' we use the base form of the verb without 's'.
× I normally categorized them by dangerous age, such as toiletries. Foods. Anne. Personal items.
✓ I normally categorize them by dangerous age, such as toiletries, foods, and personal items.
The verb 'categorized' is in past tense but the sentence describes a habitual action, so present tense 'categorize' is correct. Also, the list should be connected properly with commas and conjunctions.
× Putting off my schedule in my calendar and putting it on reminder so I'll know what I need to do the next week or upcoming event.
✓ Putting my schedule in my calendar and setting a reminder so I'll know what I need to do next week or for upcoming events.
The phrase 'putting off' means to delay, which is incorrect here. The correct preposition is 'in' for calendar and 'setting a reminder' is the proper phrase. Also, 'the next week' should be 'next week' and 'upcoming event' should be plural or preceded by 'an'.
× Some people dislike making less because they can feel overwhelming, create pressure due to perfectionism.
✓ Some people dislike making lists because they can feel overwhelmed and create pressure due to perfectionism.
The word 'less' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'. Also, 'feel overwhelming' should be 'feel overwhelmed' to correctly describe the feeling.
× Or a date is like it go to negative absolute association. From chores or past failures.
✓ Or they may have negative associations from chores or past failures.
The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and structure. 'They' is the correct pronoun to refer to people, and the sentence is restructured for clarity.
× Are we need to update them anywhere and is real time sync.
✓ We need to update them anywhere and there is real-time sync.
The phrase 'Are we need' is incorrect; it should be 'We need'. Also, 'is real time sync' should be 'there is real-time sync' to be grammatically correct.
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