列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan perbaiki kesalahan seperti 'I should you make' menjadi 'I usually make'. Selain itu, hindari pengulangan yang tidak perlu dan buat kalimat lebih ringkas.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to organize what I need to buy. This helps me avoid unnecessary purchases and saves time. For example, I write down essential groceries so I don't forget anything important.

建議: Jawaban Anda mengandung beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat yang kurang tepat, seperti penggunaan kata kerja dan bentuk jamak. Perbaiki kalimat agar lebih jelas dan gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide dengan baik.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage tasks efficiently. For example, as a teacher, I prepare detailed lesson plans and create lists to monitor my students' progress on assignments. This method works well because it ensures I don't forget important tasks.

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat beberapa kesalahan kata dan kalimat yang tidak relevan seperti 'think sports spontaneously' dan 'There's task in adverts'. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih tepat dan fokus pada alasan mengapa orang tidak suka membuat daftar dengan contoh yang relevan.

範例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to act spontaneously. For example, they may feel that too much planning limits their flexibility and creativity. Also, some people simply forget or don't see the benefits of organizing their tasks.

建議: Jawaban Anda sulit dipahami karena banyak kalimat yang tidak jelas dan tidak terstruktur dengan baik. Cobalah untuk menyusun jawaban yang lebih teratur dan gunakan kalimat yang jelas untuk menjelaskan preferensi Anda antara membuat daftar di kertas atau di ponsel.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember them better. I am a visual learner, so handwriting is more effective for me. Although I also use my phone sometimes, I find paper lists help me focus more.

× Yes, I should you make a shopping list to organize what I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I should make a shopping list to organize what I need to buy.

The modal verb 'should' is incorrectly followed by 'you'. The correct structure is 'should' + base verb without 'you'. Remove 'you' to correct the sentence.

× For example, as teacher I prepared a detailed Lesson plan and create list to monitor my students progress an assignment.

✓ For example, as a teacher I prepared a detailed lesson plan and created a list to monitor my students' progress and assignments.

Missing article 'a' before 'teacher' and 'lesson plan'. 'Create' should be past tense 'created' to match 'prepared'. 'Students progress an assignment' should be 'students' progress and assignments' to show possession and plural form.

× This method works well for me because it ensure ensures that I don't forget important task.

✓ This method works well for me because it ensures that I don't forget important tasks.

The verb 'ensure' should be in third person singular present tense 'ensures' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks'.

× According to me, some people don't like making lists because they find it time consuming and prefer to think sports spontaneously.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to think about sports spontaneously.

'According to me' is incorrect; use 'In my opinion'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. 'Prefer to think sports' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to think about sports'.

× There's task in adverts.

✓ There are tasks in adverts.

'There's' is a contraction of 'there is' which is singular, but 'task' should be plural 'tasks'. Use 'There are' for plural nouns.

× I prove it to Mecca, listen on the paper, because if I'm writing, I also remember what I wrote.

✓ I prefer it on paper, because if I'm writing, I also remember what I wrote.

'I prove it to Mecca' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended 'I prefer it on paper'. 'Listen on the paper' is incorrect; it should be omitted or corrected to 'I prefer it on paper'.

× So I am a visual person, so I need to write it well by handwriting.

✓ I am a visual person, so I need to write it by hand.

Redundant use of 'so' at the beginning and middle. 'Write it well by handwriting' is awkward; 'write it by hand' is the correct expression.

× Then a phone, because even the phone, yeah, I will focus.

✓ Then, on the phone, because even with the phone, I can focus.

Sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding prepositions and conjunctions clarifies meaning: 'Then, on the phone, because even with the phone, I can focus.'