列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more structured and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repetition and keep your sentences concise.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time. For example, last week I bought everything on my list without forgetting anything.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words to explain how making lists helps you at work, and avoid irrelevant details.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and complete them on time. This method ensures I don't forget any important duties during the day.

建議: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why some people avoid making lists.

範例: I think some people prefer not to make lists because they believe their memory is good enough to remember everything. Therefore, they feel making lists is unnecessary.

建議: Your answer should be clearer and more grammatically correct. Start with a direct response, then explain your preference with specific reasons using linking words like 'because'.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better. For instance, when I write a list, I find it easier to keep track of my tasks.

× Yes I I make a list when I was go for shop becauses in it was helping me.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it helps me.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'was go' which is not the correct past tense form. The correct form is 'go' for present tense or 'went' for past tense. Since the context is habitual action, present tense 'go' is appropriate. Also, 'becauses' should be 'because' and 'in it was helping me' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me'.

× To buy things when when maybe I forget and it also save my time.

✓ To buy things when maybe I forget, and it also saves my time.

The verb 'save' should be in third person singular present tense 'saves' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, the sentence structure needs a comma to separate clauses properly.

× So that's why I'm making a list.

✓ So that's why I make a list.

The present continuous 'I'm making' suggests an action happening now, but the context is habitual action, so simple present 'I make' is more appropriate.

× Yes. I was make a list when I was go for a walk.

✓ Yes. I make a list when I go for a walk.

'Was make' and 'was go' are incorrect past tense forms. For habitual actions, simple present tense 'make' and 'go' should be used.

× I'm going for work becauses it helps me to organize my work.

✓ I go to work because it helps me to organize my work.

'I'm going' suggests a current action, but the context is habitual, so simple present 'I go' is appropriate. Also, 'becauses' should be 'because'.

× And it also helped me to maintain my duties, you know?

✓ And it also helps me to maintain my duties, you know?

The verb 'helped' is past tense, but the context is habitual, so present tense 'helps' is correct.

× Sequence V. And.

✓ (This fragment is unclear and incomplete; it should be removed or completed.)

The phrase 'Sequence V. And.' is incomplete and does not form a proper sentence. It should be clarified or omitted.

× I think most of the people. Thinks that. Her state of mind is better and he remember all things.

✓ I think most people think that their state of mind is better and they remember everything.

'Most of the people' should be 'most people'. 'Thinks' should be 'think' to agree with plural subject. 'Her' and 'he' are incorrect pronouns here; 'their' and 'they' are appropriate for plural subject. 'All things' is better expressed as 'everything'.

× So. Dad note make a list on phone or writing other papers.

✓ So, they do not make a list on the phone or write on other papers.

'Dad note' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'do not'. Pronouns and verbs need correction to 'they do not make' and 'write' instead of 'writing'. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on the phone'.

× Do you put African Methodist? I prefer to make a list on a paper.

✓ Do you put it on your phone? I prefer to make a list on paper.

The phrase 'Do you put African Methodist?' is unclear and likely incorrect. Assuming the intended question is 'Do you put it on your phone?'. Also, 'on a paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here.

× Becauses it was easy for me because when I was write something and it is a it was help to me to remember everything.

✓ Because it is easy for me; when I write something, it helps me to remember everything.

'Becauses' should be 'because'. 'Was write' is incorrect; correct is 'write' in present tense for habitual action. 'It is a it was help to me' is incorrect; correct is 'it helps me'. The sentence should be in present tense to reflect habitual action.