列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, say: "Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need to buy."

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.

建議: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. For example: "Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organise my schedule effectively."

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organise my schedule effectively and ensure I don't forget important tasks.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons and use linking words. For example: "Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and go with the flow."

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and go with the flow, which allows them to be more flexible in their daily activities.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains awkward phrasing. Provide a clear preference with reasons and use linking words. For example: "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and helps protect my privacy."

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient, easy to edit, and helps protect my privacy compared to paper lists.

× Yes, of course I.

✓ Yes, of course I do.

The original sentence lacks a main verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'do' completes the sentence and correctly answers the question in present tense.

× I'm right, at least because it helps me to remember the things that I want to get, I want to purchase.

✓ I'm right, at least because it helps me to remember the things that I want to get, to purchase.

The sentence is awkward and redundant with 'I want to get, I want to purchase.' Replacing the second phrase with 'to purchase' avoids repetition and improves clarity.

× Oh yes, of course I do.

✓ Oh yes, of course I do.

This sentence is correct and requires no correction.

× I do before to make a list in my work 'cause it helped me to remember my work schedule is well, it's the.

✓ I do make a list before work because it helps me to remember my work schedule well.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and tense inconsistency. 'I do before to make' is incorrect; it should be 'I do make a list before work.' Also, 'helped' should be present tense 'helps' to match the habitual action. The phrase 'my work schedule is well, it's the' is unclear and corrected to 'remember my work schedule well.'

× My point to be people do not be fought to make list in their life because.

✓ My point is that people are not used to making lists in their life because.

The original sentence misuses 'to be' and 'do not be fought.' The correct expression is 'My point is that' and 'people are not used to making lists.' Also, 'make list' should be 'making lists' for correct verb form and plural.

× They want to go with the flow of the life, so they didn't, so they didn't want to. Make a list.

✓ They want to go with the flow of life, so they don't want to make a list.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and unnecessary repetition. 'Didn't' is past tense but the context suggests present tense 'don't.' Also, 'the life' should be 'life' without 'the.' The sentence is corrected for clarity and tense consistency.

× Actually I prefer to make a list on my phone because in knowledge technology is the best thing to keep your files in.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because technology is the best way to keep your files.

The phrase 'in knowledge technology is the best thing to keep your files in' is awkward and incorrect. It is corrected to 'technology is the best way to keep your files' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Is relates your privates privacy for example.

✓ It relates to your private privacy, for example.

The sentence lacks a subject and uses 'Is' incorrectly. It should start with 'It' as the subject. Also, 'privates privacy' is incorrect; 'private privacy' is more appropriate, though 'privacy' alone would suffice. Added 'to' after 'relates' for correct preposition use.