列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to form complete sentences and avoid fragmented phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain why you make a list before shopping. Keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I always prepare a checklist at home before going shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains many short, incomplete sentences. Try to combine ideas into full sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to explain the benefits of making a list for work.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before starting any work because it helps me manage my time effectively and avoid delays in important tasks.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on giving a clear reason why some people dislike making lists, using correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and think it wastes their time.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is fragmented and repetitive. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your preference clearly and naturally.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to carry and always with me, so I can easily check my list and complete tasks anytime.

× Yes, I do, whenever I. When? For shopping I always. Prepare a checklist. At home before going to shopping becaused. We.

✓ Yes, I do. Whenever I go shopping, I always prepare a checklist at home before going shopping because we need to be organized.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure, making them unclear. Combining the fragments into complete sentences improves clarity and coherence.

× At home before going to shopping becaused.

✓ At home before going shopping because.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'.

× Yes I do. I always make a list before doing any work. Because it. It helps me. In time management. And delete and to avoid a delay in necessity work. Yes, it always work.

✓ Yes, I do. I always make a list before doing any work because it helps me with time management and to avoid delays in necessary work. Yes, it always works.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain awkward phrasing. Combining them into complete sentences and correcting word choice improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, it always work.

✓ Yes, it always works.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'works' to agree in number.

× Some people doesn't like make English becauses.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because.

'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'make English becauses' is unclear; likely intended 'making lists because'.

× Get hard at it is the time these days.

✓ It is hard to do because of the time constraints these days.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Rephrasing it into a complete sentence clarifies the meaning.

× It is a time. It is a waste of time.

✓ It is a waste of time.

The first sentence is incomplete and unnecessary; combining into one clear sentence improves clarity.

× I prefer to prepare a list on. On my phone becaused.

✓ I prefer to prepare a list on my phone because

The sentence is fragmented and contains a misspelling 'becaused' instead of 'because'. Combining fragments into a complete sentence is necessary.

× Phone is easy to carry and the and the phone is always. With me so I can easily purchase anything. From the list and do any task.

✓ The phone is easy to carry and is always with me, so I can easily purchase anything from the list and complete any task.

The original sentences are fragmented and repetitive. Combining them into a coherent sentence improves readability and correctness.