列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ слишком длинный и немного неструктурированный. Следует использовать более связные предложения и избегать повторов. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I tend to forget items. Moreover, without a list, I often buy unnecessary things, which wastes money.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует улучшить структуру предложения и использовать связующие слова для ясности.

範例: Yes, I always make a list of tasks because I teach many students. Since lessons can be canceled, the list helps me reschedule effectively.

建議: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении. Рекомендуется использовать более точные выражения и связующие слова для логичности.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they don't have time. Also, they prefer to live without plans and often change their daily schedule.

建議: Ответ нечеткий и содержит много грамматических ошибок. Следует улучшить связность и ясность, а также использовать правильные слова.

範例: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I write lists on paper, but other times I use my phone because I can tick tasks when completed.

× Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I can easily forget what I wanted to buy and when I go to the supermarket I can buy extra things and that I really didn't need and it takes. A lot of money to be honest.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I can easily forget what I want to buy, and when I go to the supermarket, I can buy extra things that I really don't need, and it takes a lot of money, to be honest.

The original sentence has run-on structure and inconsistent tense usage. 'Wanted' should be 'want' to match present tense context. The phrase 'and that I really didn't need' is awkward and should be 'things that I really don't need'. Also, the sentence is fragmented with 'and it takes. A lot of money' which should be combined properly. Improving sentence structure and tense consistency makes the sentence clearer.

× Yes, I always try to write what I need to do because I have a lot of students whom I need to teach and sometimes my students can cancel the lesson and I have to write when I can. Hold this lesson.

✓ Yes, I always try to write what I need to do because I have a lot of students whom I need to teach, and sometimes my students cancel the lesson, so I have to write when I can hold this lesson.

The phrase 'can cancel' is better as 'cancel' to express habitual action. The sentence 'I have to write when I can. Hold this lesson.' is fragmented and unclear; it should be combined as 'I have to write when I can hold this lesson' to clarify meaning and maintain present tense consistency.

× So that's why I should always make sure that I made this list and it really works.

✓ So that's why I always make sure that I make this list, and it really works.

The phrase 'I should always make sure that I made this list' mixes modal 'should' with past tense 'made', which is inconsistent. It should be present tense 'make' to match the habitual action. Also, 'should' is unnecessary here; simple present tense expresses the intended meaning better.

× I think that's because they don't have time on making lists.

✓ I think that's because they don't have time to make lists.

The phrase 'have time on making' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' followed by the base verb form: 'have time to make'. This is the standard English expression for indicating availability of time for an activity.

× Also I think the really don't need it because the leave without plans.

✓ Also, I think they really don't need it because they live without plans.

The pronouns 'the' are incorrectly used instead of 'they'. Also, 'leave' is a wrong word here; the correct verb is 'live'. Correct pronoun usage and verb choice are essential for clarity.

× They can change their daily plan several times so that's why I think they don't need any plans.

✓ They can change their daily plans several times, so that's why I think they don't need any plans.

The word 'plan' should be plural 'plans' to match 'several times' indicating multiple changes. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1), but since the instruction is to correct only mistakes that meet the problem list, and pluralization is included, this correction is valid.

× It always difference on my mood.

✓ It always depends on my mood.

'Difference' is a noun and cannot be used as a verb here. The correct verb is 'depends'. This is an incorrect use of word form, which falls under incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13).

× Sometimes I can I'll write on the least of paper or sometimes I can write it on my phone so I could.

✓ Sometimes I'll write on a list of paper, or sometimes I write it on my phone so I can.

The phrase 'I can I'll write' is incorrect and redundant. 'Least' should be 'list'. The modal verb 'could' is inconsistent with present habitual action; 'can' is appropriate. Sentence structure is corrected for clarity and tense consistency.

× Tick if I did this task and go to the next one and sometimes I can't find. Pan to take the least on the paper.

✓ Tick if I have done this task and go to the next one, and sometimes I can't find a pen to take the list on the paper.

'Did' should be 'have done' to indicate completed action relevant to present. 'Pan' is a typo for 'pen'. 'Least' should be 'list'. Prepositions and articles are corrected for proper usage.