列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence structure. For example, say "I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from forgetting items."

範例: I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from forgetting items.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and directly. For example, "No, I don't make a work list because I naturally remember my tasks, and I think making a list would be a waste of time."

範例: No, I don't make a work list because I naturally remember my tasks, and I think making a list would be a waste of time.

建議: Your answer has many grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct word choices. For example, "In my opinion, many people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time and prefer to remember things naturally."

範例: In my opinion, many people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time and prefer to remember things naturally.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammar errors. Try to express your preference clearly and use correct phrases. For example, "I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have my phone with me, so I can easily add or delete items without needing paper."

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have my phone with me, so I can easily add or delete items without needing paper.

× Yes, I always make a list and then I go for shopping because it is very easy way to remember everything which I need and I don't forget anything if I if I make list.

✓ Yes, I always make a list and then I go shopping because it is a very easy way to remember everything I need and I don't forget anything if I make a list.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' which uses the verb + -ing form without 'for'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list' to include the article 'a'. Additionally, 'which I need' is better as 'I need' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I always make a list and then I go for shopping because it is very easy way to remember everything which I need and I don't forget anything if I if I make list.

✓ Yes, I always make a list and then I go shopping because it is a very easy way to remember everything I need and I don't forget anything if I make a list.

The phrase 'very easy way' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct: 'a very easy way'. Also, 'make list' needs the article 'a' to be 'make a list'.

× No, I do not make a list of all my work because I remember my work day is a naturally and I think it is totally wasted of time if are you. If I make a list of all my work.

✓ No, I do not make a list of all my work because I remember my workday naturally and I think it is a total waste of time if I make a list of all my work.

The phrase 'work day' should be one word 'workday'. 'A naturally' is incorrect; 'naturally' is an adverb and does not need an article. 'Totally wasted of time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a total waste of time'. Also, 'if are you' is incorrect and should be removed or corrected to 'if I make a list'.

× No, I do not make a list of all my work because I remember my work day is a naturally and I think it is totally wasted of time if are you. If I make a list of all my work.

✓ No, I do not make a list of all my work because I remember my workday naturally and I think it is a total waste of time if I make a list of all my work.

The phrase 'a naturally' is incorrect because 'naturally' is an adverb and does not require an article. Also, 'totally wasted of time' should be 'a total waste of time' to use the correct noun phrase with the article 'a'.

× According to me, mostly people don't like like to making our list because they think this is totally harvesters of time and they mostly prefer to remember we were things by naturally and mostly people think this is totally time consuming and they need a lot of time to return.

✓ According to me, most people don't like making lists because they think this is a total waste of time and they mostly prefer to remember things naturally. Also, most people think this is very time-consuming and they need a lot of time to write things down.

The phrase 'like to making' is incorrect; it should be either 'like making' or 'like to make'. 'Our list' should be 'lists' to match the plural subject. 'Harvesters of time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a total waste of time'. 'Remember we were things by naturally' is incorrect and should be 'remember things naturally'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. 'Return' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'write' or 'write down'.

× I know to making a list on my phone because it is easy to roll and I always carry my phone with them with me when I go outside if I want to return down anything and want to delete anything.

✓ I like making a list on my phone because it is easy to use and I always carry my phone with me when I go outside if I want to write down anything or want to delete anything.

The phrase 'I know to making' is incorrect; it should be 'I like making'. 'Easy to roll' is incorrect; likely intended 'easy to use'. 'Carry my phone with them with me' is incorrect; 'them' should be removed. 'Return down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write down'.

× I know to making a list on my phone because it is easy to roll and I always carry my phone with them with me when I go outside if I want to return down anything and want to delete anything.

✓ I like making a list on my phone because it is easy to use and I always carry my phone with me when I go outside if I want to write down anything or want to delete anything.

The phrase 'I know to making' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I like making' using the verb + -ing form after 'like'. 'Return down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write down'.