列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，例如“before I going shopping”应为“before I go shopping”，且句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，同时避免冗余。

範例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and control my spending, which saves me a lot of money.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“make a list of for my work”和“reduce myself”不明确。建议使用清晰的句子表达观点，并补充具体细节说明列表如何帮助工作效率。

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and plan ahead, which improves my efficiency and reduces stress.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“prefer a write them and free lifestyle”不合适。建议简化表达，明确说明原因，并使用连贯的句子结构。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and prefer a more spontaneous lifestyle, which they find more exciting.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“make a list are on my phone”和“will lose to it”。建议使用简洁明了的句子，清楚表达偏好及原因。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I might lose paper lists, but my phone is convenient and always with me.

× As I always make a list before I going shopping because I think make it not only can help me buy anything that I need but also it's a help me to control my buttons which saves a lot of money and I think making a list how may to make the process more if.

✓ As I always make a list before I go shopping because I think making it not only can help me buy anything that I need but also it helps me to control my budget which saves a lot of money and I think making a list may make the process easier.

句中“before I going shopping”应为“before I go shopping”，动词go应使用原形，因为before后接动词原形表示时间状语。

× As I always make a list before I going shopping because I think make it not only can help me buy anything that I need but also it's a help me to control my buttons which saves a lot of money and I think making a list how may to make the process more if.

✓ As I always make a list before I go shopping because I think making it not only can help me buy anything that I need but also it helps me to control my budget which saves a lot of money and I think making a list may make the process easier.

句中“it's a help me to control my buttons”中“it's a help me”结构错误，应改为“it helps me”，且“buttons”应为“budget”，代词和名词使用错误。

× Of course, I always make a list of for my work because I would like to stay organized, well organized. Well I think it's due to my MBTI tab I in TJ, which means I would like to plan ahead and it not only can help me work more efficiently but also can reduce myself.

✓ Of course, I always make a list for my work because I would like to stay organized, well organized. Well, I think it's due to my MBTI type, INTJ, which means I like to plan ahead and it not only can help me work more efficiently but also can reduce my mistakes.

句中“make a list of for my work”中“of”多余，应去掉；“MBTI tab I in TJ”应为“MBTI type INTJ”；“reduce myself”用词错误，应为“reduce my mistakes”或类似表达。

× While I think it depends on different personalities, you know, there are some people don't like it restrict their life because they prefer a write them and free lifestyle, which makes them feel more exciting. So I think it's very no more than some people don't like make making too much lists on their life.

✓ While I think it depends on different personalities, you know, there are some people who don't like it to restrict their life because they prefer a free and unstructured lifestyle, which makes them feel more excited. So I think it's normal that some people don't like making too many lists in their life.

句中“some people don't like it restrict their life”缺少不定式“to”，应为“don't like it to restrict”；“a write them and free lifestyle”表达错误，应为“a free and unstructured lifestyle”；“more exciting”应为“more excited”；“too much lists”应为“too many lists”；“on their life”应为“in their life”。

× I prefer to make a list are on my phone because I think if I write it on a paper I will list it. I will lose to it and it will lead to some bad thing but effort for my life and my work. So I prefer to make it on my phone or my iPad is really convenient and cheap.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think if I write it on paper I will lose it. It will lead to some bad effects on my life and my work. So I prefer to make it on my phone or my iPad because it is really convenient and cheap.

句中“make a list are on my phone”中“are”多余，应去掉；“write it on a paper”中“a”多余，应为“on paper”；“I will list it”应为“I will lose it”；“some bad thing but effort”表达错误，应为“some bad effects”；“on my life”更合适。