列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and be more specific about how the list helps you. For example, explain what kind of items you list or how it helps you save money.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I have a poor memory. The list helps me remember which stores to visit and which items to buy, so I don't waste money on unnecessary things.

建議: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain why the list only partially works. Be specific about what tasks you include and how the list helps you.

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list every day to ensure I complete all my tasks before the deadline. However, sometimes I feel lazy and don't follow it strictly, so it only partially helps me stay organized.

建議: Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and linking words. Explain reasons why some people dislike lists, such as time consumption or lack of motivation to follow them. Avoid fragmented sentences and improve vocabulary usage.

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because it takes time to prepare them, and they may not follow the list strictly. Therefore, they feel that making a to-do list is not very important or helpful.

建議: Make your answer more fluent by using correct tense and linking words. Explain clearly why you prefer your phone over paper, and give specific reasons about convenience and security.

範例: I prefer to make my lists on my phone because I can check them anytime, whether I'm at home or outside. Also, paper lists are easy to lose, but my phone keeps them safe and accessible.

× Yes I do, I would like to make a list before I wouldn't tell them market since I have a really bad memories.

✓ Yes I do, I would like to make a list because I have really bad memory.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'would like' and 'wouldn't tell them market' which is unclear and incorrect. Also, 'memories' should be 'memory' as it refers to the ability to remember in general. The corrected sentence uses simple present and correct noun form to express the idea clearly.

× The list helps me to remember where should I buy and who should who should I not buy to save my money.

✓ The list helps me remember where I should buy and what I should not buy to save my money.

The original sentence has incorrect word order in indirect questions and repetition ('who should who should'). The correction fixes the word order and replaces 'who' with 'what' as it refers to things to buy, not people.

× I do make list for my work, A to do list every single day to make sure that I complete every single word that I should be done on that day before the dude.

✓ I do make a list for my work, a to-do list every single day to make sure that I complete every single task that I should do on that day before the deadline.

The original sentence misses the article 'a' before 'list' and 'to-do list'. 'Word' is incorrect in this context; 'task' is appropriate. 'Before the dude' is unclear and corrected to 'before the deadline' to make sense.

× But sometimes I was really lazy to follow the list so.

✓ But sometimes I am really lazy to follow the list.

The question is about habitual action, so present tense 'am' is appropriate instead of past tense 'was'. The sentence is also completed properly.

× A partially works, but not that perfect.

✓ It partially works, but it is not perfect.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement. 'A partially works' is incorrect; 'It partially works' is correct. Also, 'not that perfect' is informal; 'not perfect' is clearer.

× And my personal opinions, I feel like making list is also going to waste part of some of your times let's say and you might not really following it so for some peoples.

✓ In my personal opinion, I feel like making a list is also going to waste some of your time, let's say, and you might not really follow it, so for some people,

'My personal opinions' should be 'In my personal opinion' (singular). 'Making list' needs an article 'a'. 'Times' should be singular 'time' in this context. 'Following' should be 'follow' to match modal verb usage. 'Peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is the correct plural form.

× Make todo list or not so. Important. And helpful. And at the same time it was the times.

✓ making a to-do list or not is not so important and helpful, and at the same time, it wastes time.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It is corrected to a complete sentence with proper structure and meaning.

× If I am making a list, I preferred to make it on my phone so I can check here regularly whenever I went out.

✓ If I am making a list, I prefer to make it on my phone so I can check it regularly whenever I go out.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Preferred' should be present tense 'prefer' to match 'If I am making'. 'Went' should be 'go' for habitual action.

× Or even when I was at home.

✓ Or even when I am at home.

To maintain consistency with present tense habitual actions, 'was' should be 'am'.

× But the pencil paper is really easy to be lost compared to phone.

✓ But pencil and paper are really easy to lose compared to a phone.

'Pencil paper' is incorrect; it should be 'pencil and paper'. 'Easy to be lost' is awkward; 'easy to lose' is correct. 'Phone' needs an article 'a'.