列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct tense and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas effectively. For example, say 'I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents overspending. I usually write it down on paper before I go.'

範例: I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from spending too much money. Usually, I write it down on paper before I go to the store.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and supporting details with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, 'Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks. I usually use a digital app to remind me of my daily duties.'

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks. I usually use a digital app that reminds me about my daily duties and deadlines.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and linking words. For example, 'Honestly, I don't mind people making lists. However, some people might find it stressful to remember everything. In my opinion, lists are helpful, so I support making them.'

範例: Honestly, I don't mind people making lists. However, some people might find it stressful to remember everything without a list. I think lists are helpful, so I support people who make them.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using better linking words and complete sentences. For example, 'I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to use and I always have it with me.'

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to use and I always have it with me wherever I go.

× Yes, I make a list when I saw it's help me remember what I need to buy an keeps me from spending too much money.

✓ Yes, I make a list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and keeps me from spending too much money.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'saw' (past tense) where 'because' or 'since' should be used to explain the reason. Also, 'it's help' should be 'it helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The verb 'keeps' is correct but was connected incorrectly with 'an' instead of 'and'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I make a list when I saw it's help me remember what I need to buy an keeps me from spending too much money.

✓ Yes, I make a list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and keeps me from spending too much money.

The verbs 'help' and 'keeps' refer to the singular subject 'it' and should be in third person singular form. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with 'it'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement.

× It's health helps me stay organized and focus on my work.

✓ It helps me stay organized and focus on my work.

The phrase 'It's health' is incorrect. 'It's' is a contraction for 'it is' or 'it has', which does not fit here. The correct pronoun is 'It' referring to the list. Removing 'health' corrects the sentence.

× I need to do I used to digitally every word remember? Reminds me about my day. Task an I felt.

✓ I need to do my tasks digitally to remember everything. It reminds me about my day.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Reconstructing them into coherent sentences with proper subject-verb-object order improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think list are helpful so I don't mind people making them.

✓ I think lists are helpful so I don't mind people making them.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper noun number.

× Honestly, I don't mind people. Making the list.

✓ Honestly, I don't mind people making lists.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses a period incorrectly. Combining the sentences and using 'lists' pluralizes the object correctly and improves sentence flow.

× But some people might find it I knowing it if there. Trying to remember everything.

✓ But some people might find it difficult to know if they are trying to remember everything.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and pronouns, making it unclear. Replacing 'I knowing it if there' with 'difficult to know if they are' corrects the preposition and pronoun usage.

× I think list are helpful so I don't mind people making them.

✓ I think lists are helpful so I don't mind people making them.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the plural verb 'are'. This correction ensures proper subject-verb agreement.

× Well, I prefer my phone, it's easy to use, moreover always with me.

✓ Well, I prefer my phone because it's easy to use and is always with me.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'moreover' as a conjunction and lacks a verb in the last clause. Replacing 'moreover' with 'because' and adding 'is' before 'always with me' corrects the conjunction use and sentence structure.