列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to directly answer the question first, then give specific reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I forgot to buy milk when I didn't have a list, which was inconvenient.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making a list or timetable helps you manage your work. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I make a list or timetable for my studies because it helps me organise my tasks efficiently. For instance, I plan my study hours and assignments, so I don't miss any deadlines.

建議: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Explain reasons why some people avoid making lists, such as preferring spontaneity or finding it time-consuming. Use clear sentences and linking words.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to shop spontaneously. For example, my friend likes to choose items as she goes without planning.

建議: Your answer has good points but is unclear and incomplete. Clearly state your preference first, then explain reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and finish your sentences properly.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is convenient to carry and environmentally friendly. Unlike paper lists, digital lists reduce waste and are easy to edit.

× because with the help of making list I can remember all the things and I can fall.

✓ because with the help of making a list I can remember all the things and I can recall.

The phrase 'making list' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list' to use the gerund form correctly with an article. Also, 'I can fall' seems to be a mistake for 'I can recall' or 'I can remember'.

× I can't forget anything about which is on my list present, but the one I had no make any listen on that time.

✓ I can't forget anything which is on my present list, but the ones I had no list made at that time.

The sentence has singular/plural confusion and incorrect word usage. 'Listen' should be 'list', and 'no make any listen' is incorrect; it should be 'had no list made'. Also, 'anything about which is on my list present' is awkward; it should be 'anything which is on my present list'.

× I was so confused and I all also forgot anything which is very important for me.

✓ I was so confused and I also forgot everything which was very important to me.

The phrase 'I all also forgot anything' is incorrect; it should be 'I also forgot everything'. Also, 'which is very important for me' should be in past tense 'which was very important to me' to match the past context.

× Yes, of course when I set up my timetable like related to my study, so on that time I prefer to make a my timetable with the help of timetable I manage manage all the necessary all like all organisations system regarding my schoolwork and even when I make a list of.

✓ Yes, of course, when I set up my timetable related to my study, at that time I prefer to make my timetable. With the help of the timetable, I manage all the necessary organizational systems regarding my schoolwork, and even when I make a list.

The sentence is very long and confusing. 'Like related to my study' should be 'related to my study'. 'Make a my timetable' is incorrect; it should be 'make my timetable'. Repetition of 'manage' is an error. The sentence structure needs correction for clarity.

× Because some people have no good memory and they easily forgot anything.

✓ Because some people do not have a good memory and they easily forget things.

'Have no good memory' is incorrect; it should be 'do not have a good memory'. Also, 'forgot' is past tense but the sentence is general, so 'forget' is correct. 'Anything' should be 'things' for general statements.

× So this is the reason people like to make the list about their grocery items an any shopping purpose.

✓ So this is the reason people like to make lists for their grocery items and any shopping purpose.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect here; it should be 'for'. Also, 'an any' is a typo and should be 'and any'. 'Make the list' should be 'make lists' for general meaning.

× Well, I I personally prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because with the help of a make list on my mobile phone, I can easily carry them and it also help to prevent her from the pollution like overnight make a list on the paper based.

✓ Well, I personally prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because with the help of making a list on my mobile phone, I can easily carry it and it also helps to prevent pollution compared to making a list on paper.

'A make list' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'. 'Carry them' is incorrect as 'list' is singular; it should be 'carry it'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject. 'Prevent her from the pollution' is incorrect; 'her' is wrong pronoun and unnecessary. 'Like overnight make a list on the paper based' is unclear and corrected to 'compared to making a list on paper'.