列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời trở nên rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lợi ích của việc lập danh sách.

範例: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me remember all my tasks. When I write down my daily goals, I can manage my time more effectively.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần được tổ chức lại để rõ ràng và có ý nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể hơn.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time and feels unnecessary.

建議: Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt ý kiến của mình. Hãy giải thích lý do tại sao bạn thích sử dụng điện thoại để lập danh sách.

範例: Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I often use it and have many useful apps for organizing my tasks.

× Yes, I usually make a lick when I go shopping because oh is help me remember.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember.

The word 'lick' is a typo and should be 'list' (singular). Also, 'oh is help me remember' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me remember' to agree with the singular subject 'list'. This is a singular and plural issue and subject-verb agreement.

× Remember everything I dict.

✓ Remember everything I did.

The word 'dict' is incorrect and likely a typo for 'did'. The pronoun 'I' is correct, but the verb needs to be corrected to past tense 'did' to make sense.

× Yes, I often make a list for my work because it's me. Remember everything I can say my time for assemble.

✓ Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me remember everything. I can save my time for assembly.

'It's me' is incorrect here; it should be 'it helps me'. 'I can say my time for assemble' is incorrect; it should be 'I can save my time for assembly'. The pronouns and verbs are misused, causing confusion.

× I when I write down my Dolly go, I can manage my time more effect. Tea leaf.

✓ When I write down my daily goals, I can manage my time more effectively.

'Dolly go' is a mispronunciation of 'daily goals'. 'More effect' should be 'more effectively' to correctly use the adverb form. 'Tea leaf' is irrelevant and should be removed.

× Some people don't like making lists because they think. Is where is time in.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time.

'Is where is time in' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'it wastes time' to correctly express the idea. The pronoun 'it' is needed to refer to making lists.

× They feel it. Is not where we recess 3.

✓ They feel it is not worth the effort.

'Is not where we recess 3' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'it is not worth the effort' to convey the intended meaning. Proper pronouns and phrases are necessary.

× He. Well, I like to make a list on my on my phone because it is your eye.

✓ Well, I like to make a list on my phone because it is convenient.

'He.' is unnecessary and confusing. 'It is your eye' is incorrect; likely meant 'it is easy' or 'convenient'. Pronouns and expressions need correction.

× Often use phone in in his. Not app in my phone.

✓ I often use my phone and the apps on it.

'Use phone in in his' is incorrect; should be 'use my phone'. 'Not app in my phone' is unclear; should be 'the apps on my phone'. Prepositions and possessive pronouns need correction.