列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子，避免语法错误，并使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves me money.

建議: 回答内容不清晰，句子结构混乱，词汇使用错误，导致表达不明确。建议使用简单明了的句子，清楚说明制作工作清单的时间和效果。

範例: Yes, I make a work list every month and follow it to complete my tasks one by one.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，并用更准确的词汇表达原因。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring, but I need lists to remind me of my tasks because I often forget things.

建議: 回答中有多处语法和用词错误，表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达偏好和原因。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it allows me to check them anytime and anywhere easily.

× I always make a list when I go shopping because I can clearly know that what. Thing I should buy and they'd allowed me to save more money.

✓ I always make a list when I go shopping because I can clearly know what things I should buy and they'd allow me to save more money.

这里的“Thing”应为复数形式“things”，因为指的是多样的物品。单复数错误会影响句子表达的准确性。

× I always make a list when I go shopping because I can clearly know that what. Thing I should buy and they'd allowed me to save more money.

✓ I always make a list when I go shopping because I can clearly know what things I should buy and they'd allow me to save more money.

“they'd allowed”中的“allowed”时态不正确，应使用情态动词后接动词原形“allow”。

× Yes, I always make a work list in such as annual organist month, a new month, month month over Glazed and they're organist and I will finish one by one. Follow the list.

✓ Yes, I always make a work list in months such as annual organization month, a new month, month over Glazed and their organization, and I will finish one by one following the list.

“month”应为复数“months”，表示多个时间段；“organist”应为“organization”，且“they're”应为“their”，涉及复数和词形错误。

× Yes, I always make a work list in such as annual organist month, a new month, month month over Glazed and they're organist and I will finish one by one. Follow the list.

✓ Yes, I always make a work list in months such as annual organization month, a new month, month over Glazed and their organization, and I will finish one by one following the list.

“in such as”用法错误，应改为“in months such as”，正确使用介词短语。

× Follow the list.

✓ I follow the list.

“Follow the list.”缺少主语，句子不完整，应补充主语使句子完整。

× For me I'm am extremely forgettable people and I always forget do anything so I have to make make unlisted to remind me to complete jobs.

✓ For me, I am an extremely forgetful person and I always forget to do anything, so I have to make a list to remind me to complete jobs.

“forgettable people”应为“forgetful person”，代词和名词形式错误；“make make unlisted”应为“make a list”，词语错误。

× For me I'm am extremely forgettable people and I always forget do anything so I have to make make unlisted to remind me to complete jobs.

✓ For me, I am an extremely forgetful person and I always forget to do anything, so I have to make a list to remind me to complete jobs.

“forget do anything”缺少介词“to”，正确表达应为“forget to do anything”。

× Well, I pray for to make an A list on my phone and it has a call too. Allowed me. It's allowed me to. Check it. Check it every N anyway, anywhere and anytime.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone and it has a call feature too. It allows me to check it anytime, anywhere, and anyway.

“pray for to make an A list”用词错误，应为“prefer to make a list”；“allowed me”应为“allows me”，时态和用词错误；“every N anyway”表达不清，应改为“anytime, anywhere, and anyway”。